yeah man, the extensions are skewing the structure. Redraw that without the extensions and post it.
I'll crit the bare letter, but i don't like your extensions.
DMT is like a 12 hour acid trip condensed into 30 minutes. It's fucking crazy, all touch with reality is removed and replaced with shit that is entirely inconceivable without the drug.
This is not a trip for the weak of mind or nervous natured.
Just visited asheville. I don't like to town, but it's great for graff!
Is the river district legal? Like all the buildings and shit?
PM me if you can.