sneekatoke
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drew - just draw simple generic letters at first, like the 2nd DAHR in the picture above... do this over and over and over til you hate it... then do it some more. it builds understanding of structure, patience, line smoothness, pretty much everything... once youve gotten simples down, start adding small things and seeing how it works, etc....
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yokai - gettin way better than when you first popped on here, keep it up, and props on keeping cosistent letter widths, its kinda hard to do and a mistake that leaves many potentially dope pieces/ideas lookin like shit...
sheen - youre trying too hard on your sig, and it shows... just let the funk flow... and i dont know what the sticker is of...
klime - chill with colorin for a while and get into more basic lettering. the featured sketch is misguided but potentially cool... also lose the arrows man...
sirisfour - you're an idiot. but post a sketch.
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pretty good book on the green river killer called (shockingly) Green River...
...also, didnt we have a serial killer thread just a couple months ago?
either way http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Donald_Frankos
mob hitman turned rat... also has an interesting book (i believe partly written by him..?)
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boom for battle so far as well,
that dahr is lookin pretty good, the h seems skinnier than the other letters at the top though...
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warep/twich - its not horrible but you need to go simpler for a while, the consistency of the letters, flow, and extension place
SAON - you also need more practice with simples for the same reason... also, work on your N it is the worst letter and i thought it was a funky h for days...
CRUISE - work on stayin in the center of the board in your slides, and do more lips haha...
bitefight - you have been reported, the cyber police are on their way..
xoma - whoever said that looked clean lied, go simpler, everything is all over the place on that one...
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dddaaaammmmnnn he even got fuzzies on his crown....
...this battles been good...
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BAM
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hi, welcome to 12oz.....
...prolly shouldn't have done that...
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scotchXspriteXst bernardus!
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cani that ones dope,
i prefer your pieces that arent symmetrical, for some reason...
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needs proportion work, ie the d cut-in/swirl... r/n connection too low, throws it off balance, and the e should connect more clearly at the top imo....
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its an internet site...
...who cares?
-me
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jeg you took it kinda like a man at first, but you're way too arrogant for real. do you not see the bullshit that is your structure? the random juts and go-nowhere extensions? you are crazy trash, and no k00l f1ll br0 will make up for that... and no full white "OG GRAFF N DANCE WHITE PAD BLACKBOOK" is going to make your sketches nice. grab a notebook and DO SIMPLES!
(btw i do and am not dope or claiming by any means)
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i propose that monkey be the new thread...
...all in favor say AYE, please revise title to 'FIT MONKEY FLASHING HUGE NADS' , THNX...
(i bet thats whats keeping his balance, those feet look way loose...)
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drinking vodka.... fuck i hate vodka....
and pondering...
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story enjoyed
and no, not wrong....
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werm hat
vermhat's wermhat!!
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i didnt read this all but its all about
PDOS...
(/notaparticipant)
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hate - the h looks like a k kinda cause of the little thing stickin out the right side, the t gets kinda thin before the horizontal bar, and the e is kinda squished, but its not horrible...
wyre - none of those are straightforward simples. the curvy y's arent doin it imo, and most of the r's except the bottom one...
and 'hungryest hippo' for one of the lamest steezes on the site you sure got a lot of negative shit to say...
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tweakin zorb ideas, pink crayon for the daughter ha.... crits?
(i know the balance needs work)
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thanks freak, i did the middle one first and tried to improve some on the top one, but still dont quite like it... think the middle one may be better if i thinned the circular loop on the B (kinda like how the pen inside it is) i feel this would balance out the piece more, and yeah, maybe define that r leg better... do think this would improve it or is there another direction im completely overlooking?
and yeah redeye thats an exchange w/ that zorb...
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radar - as said, the first one is the best...
daku - go way simpler, as was said...
noe - nice black fingernail polish br0, haha... seriously those are a lot better, i like the 3rd one down the best, but i also have a somewhat similar style to that i guess so i dont know... id keep workin with those simples and slowly expand on them...
pos - you need consistancy! keep doing simples, you need the practice so that your lines will be cleaner, your letters will be evenly spaced, etc... and i cant crit your hands cause i hate most philly hands anyway...
also, can anyone help me out with any crits/advice on my previous post?
(and im not zorb unfortunately, haha, its an exchange... )
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Radars sketch - you dont have to lose the whole extension imo, just the part running into the letter's body...
Noe - you should probably go simpler... but def. lose the lines running into the body like i said ^, also, think about upper-case N's, as it can kinda look like "hoe" at times...
Nayto - i dig that
heres some random pen sketch/sharpie ideas...crits welcome...
Toys post here...
in Paper Chase
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SLOPI - you are not doing simples like everyone said. If you are, flick those, not the lumps of pieces that you will (if you excel) regret floating around on the internet. And dont get so defensive, it's a bad look, and you definantely aren't a genius if you can't figure out 3d or basic letter structure...
mass - better, dont like those cut in things, but i think thats more my opinion...
drew - do simples, to put it bluntly those sketches look like shit, and getting wilder isnt going to help... and if you are doing simples and just messing around with pieces... dont post one for about 6 months at least (a piece), give yourself time to evolve naturally...
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