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sneekatoke

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  1. it seems to have too much going on without a fundamental understanding of the structure, ie the wavy thin line making the middle bars, the arrows, etc.

    your letter width is also off in some places (left H bar, left A bar)

    and some of it just doesnt look becoming and should be adjusted/rethought (H+A connection at their bottom bar)

     

    My advice would be to work with simpler styles w/ no extensions at first to get the structure/width down..

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