akrbone - thats decent, keep everything at one level like use the bottom of the paper as a guide as when you did on the R + B, keep everything consistent and porportioned correctly, try to clean it up a bit, dont do that little curl thing at the bottom of your K and try and make all the letters flow together correctly, the fill is okay...im not feelin the silver bubbles....well re-sketch that and color it in and flick it and post it, i wanna see what it looks like....