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shitty shit that i want help on.

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by -sudz-, Jul 12, 2002.

  1. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    i scanned it greyscale, the colours i used sucked, but you get the jist. what do you think?

    http://www.fotango.com/p/eba00214109f00000017.jpg'>

    sorry about the size, fotango is shitty.
     
  2. fr8lover

    fr8lover Guest

    sudz i thought a bunch of people told you that the whole attempting transcendiness wasnt gonna work for ya.

    get back to nice big letters and ease up on the shadow too buddy, you could kill someone with that thing!
     
  3. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    i'm not attempting 'transcendiness'. as soon as anyone who's not wicked posts anything in here that's 'abstract' people throw that accusation.
     
  4. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Guest

    yeah... less ghost lines.. either overlap or underlap.. pick on and stick with it.
     
  5. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    yeah, i've been trying to stop with those, i've gotten into the habit i guess. thanks.
     
  6. SmeechLizard

    SmeechLizard New Jack

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 76 Likes Received: 0
    Shitty shit? I donno about that, I actually think its pretty coo. Why does everybody on this forum end their replies with "keep it up" or "keep practicing" etc? Do you really think if you dont say that shit 100000000 times that people are going to assume they should stop writing because you didnt tell them to continue? :confused: Heh, j/p, anyway I think that [email protected] is pretty nice, any criticism I would have would just be reaching for things to point out, and theres way too much useless negativity on these forums as it is. Peace. :beat:
     
  7. JohnnyHorton

    JohnnyHorton Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 2, 2002 Messages: 2,201 Likes Received: 0
    you're new here, aren't you?
     
  8. -sudz-

    -sudz- Guest

    thats what i was going to say.
     
  9. BitchAssSlut

    BitchAssSlut Member

    Joined: May 31, 2002 Messages: 376 Likes Received: 2
    whats the point of asking for help?
    unless your name is ouija, you dont seem to ever accept tips or criticism in any serious manner from anyone...

    people have been telling you to do the same thing forever now..

    what makes you think anything has changed?
     
  10. illwill

    illwill Guest

    i think theres way too much goin on in that thing. to be honest it looks kinda like chicken scratch with a 3-d. make it alot simpler.
     
  11. Arson.85.ATG

    Arson.85.ATG New Jack

    Joined: Sep 9, 2001 Messages: 13 Likes Received: 0
    i really hate it when people do that..they do their letters and then the fucking shadows like twice the size of the piece..it looks bad..i mean ok..yea u are better than some cats in here..just keep practicing....
     
  12. unseen

    unseen New Jack

    Joined: Jun 12, 2002 Messages: 85 Likes Received: 0
    my advice is to not ask for help from random ppl on the internet. reason #1 is because they dont know what your going for in ur work. reason #2 being u should try to develope on ur own and creat ur own stuff. reason #3 is the onley way u can make considerable progress is by practice u cant become very much better by following someones advice to straighten a line or tone it down or whatever. If u just have some fricken paitents and practice you will soon be crushing alot of these ppl giving u advise.
     
  13. AeRoSoL JuNkiE

    AeRoSoL JuNkiE Elite Member

    Joined: Jul 1, 2000 Messages: 2,505 Likes Received: 0
    Oh please...stop talking like your sketches are really good and you can rag on people cause you think you kick major ass. You suck until further notice buddy
     
  14. Ser3adc

    Ser3adc Guest

    make it simple man...if i didnt know what it said i would never be able to decipher it...if some other writer saw that drivin by they'd never know what it said...and isn't that what counts?...just my 2 cents
     
  15. FROSTY

    FROSTY Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 22, 2001 Messages: 2,248 Likes Received: 5
    You people all get way too indepth with your conversations. just look at the sketch and say what could be improved.

    ie
    I think the style sudz uses could work aight if he changed something with that sketch. you cant change his style because its what his mind wants it to look like. but I think you can use things such as ballance to look at. I think in some areas there are too many lines close together and it looks too unbalanced, I would say spread the lines out more evenly.

    just trying to help though, looks pretty good sudz.



    fuk im high^^^
     
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