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i write pretty somethig again waht you think

Discussion in 'Channel Zero' started by angry xbox, Dec 28, 2002.

  1. angry xbox

    angry xbox Guest

    i wrote something again waht do you think

    A thought of you crushed my mind
    The sight of you left me blind
    The sound of your words they bind
    I feel the obsession setting in
    im withering away
    now i love you and have to kill myself
    im quitting my life and heading for the desert
    ill walk for days with only your picture inmy head
    to quench my thirst
    to kindle my crawling withering body
    creeping across grains of fire
    my stomach drags across the earth like a serpent
    after im dead and the sand rots my carcas,
    a picture of you will float out of my empty echoing skull
    then one day
    another lost soul, alone and afflicted
    will catch you as you float
    another life another dream
    another silent scream
  2. BluntedMonky

    BluntedMonky New Jack

    Joined: May 13, 2002 Messages: 56 Likes Received: 0
    you should hook up with that 12oz chick that writes poems on every reply....1st
  3. angry xbox

    angry xbox Guest

  4. BluntedMonky

    BluntedMonky New Jack

    Joined: May 13, 2002 Messages: 56 Likes Received: 0
  5. L.A.

    L.A. Guest

    nigga fuck your poem
    i beat you over the head with an oatmeal sandwich
    sloopy joes and tater tots
    i wonder if dirty habit's gay or not
    cookies n cream, is it really cream or just vanilla
    why dont they call it cookies n vanilla, i gotta get the scrilla
    boy meets world, they should have a sitcom called world meets boy
    i fucked topanga in her asshole and made her suck my dick
    Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn
    power to the people, that's what black activists said in the 60's
    all i want to know is how can i get my ex-girlfriend back with me?
    jiffy, like that lubricant for your car
    jiff, like that peanut butter in a jar
    jeff, like that toys r us girrafe
    jip, is something you say when you get ripped off
    like your mom's clothes when she was on my bedspread
    get med. it pays. snoopy and charlie brown.
    i wear charlie brown sweaters
    i put that on my life and the 23rd letter
  6. NOE1

    NOE1 Junior Member

    Joined: Nov 4, 2002 Messages: 177 Likes Received: 0
  7. ZoSe

    ZoSe Guest


    FLESHEATER Senior Member

    Joined: Aug 1, 2001 Messages: 1,193 Likes Received: 0
    ~>moved to the BATTLE FORUM
  9. dosoner

    dosoner Elite Member

    Joined: Jun 8, 2000 Messages: 3,735 Likes Received: 26

    talk about callin people out.


    that shit is original underground lyrics there
  10. Feäà m3

    Feäà m3 New Jack

    Joined: Nov 20, 2002 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 0
  11. Kr430n5_666

    Kr430n5_666 Banned

    Joined: Oct 6, 2004 Messages: 19,229 Likes Received: 30
    !!!VERY CLICHE!!!


  12. uncle-boy

    uncle-boy Guest


    stop it.
  13. ment2

    ment2 New Jack

    Joined: Apr 16, 2002 Messages: 11 Likes Received: 0
    Re: i wrote something again waht do you think

  14. Born Loser

    Born Loser New Jack

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  15. zorak

    zorak Member

    Joined: Jun 5, 2002 Messages: 666 Likes Received: 1
    that is some really shitty poetry...

    really really shitty.