shape1369 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 So I figured out what was bothering me about your first two panels. I really like everything you have done except for one thing. It was previously mentioned that the orangish highlights on the rock in the second panel seem too vibrant. I disagreed with that at first, but now I think its right. Not for the same reason though. If you look in the first frame, the beginning of the rocks/canyon is on the right side, while a darker part of the sky is on the left moving brighter to the right. Now, if the light is permeating right to left, wouldnt those highlights on the rock be on the wrong side? I suppose that is assuming that the canyon the panels are taking the viewer through is moving from the right of the initial setting to the left. If so, I think the lighting is reversed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Peanut Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 looks cool to me i wanna see more * i really like the third frame in that last set too. good perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAGS156 Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 more more!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beelkaemoney Posted May 27, 2005 Share Posted May 27, 2005 mad stupid dope..fresh to def for real..keep it up..to the top!!! :king: :king: Originally posted by LENS@May 24 2005, 09:04 PM you need a lot more arrows and bubbles. throw in some sick wit it spray cans and you'll be set Quoted post herb :dunce:... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 28, 2005 Author Share Posted May 28, 2005 here u go....first page completed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
why write? Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 i like that, i wanna see more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarcasm Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 dude, that is pretty fucking cool. more please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Theo Huxtable Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 very nice toughlove. is that "whoosh" insignia done by hand or computer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Peanut Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 awesome dude...keep it going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mackfatsoe Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 YEAH DUDE, IT GETS BETTER AND BETTER, WELL DONE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flayed God X Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 Looks good. The anatomy on your female is a little off, you should probably take some figure drawing classes because in comic books you deal with a lot of different perspectives which can become pretty difficult. Also I do not know about your education but it might be good for you to buy a book on storyboarding. This teaches you about camera angles, perspectives, continuity( very important) . . .all the things you need to have your story flow nicely. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KING BLING Posted May 28, 2005 Share Posted May 28, 2005 I like what you have done here, but you might want to concider working with someone on the writing. The "confederation" instantly brought to mind obvious cliches such as Star Wars and Star Trek. Also you should not call it a space ship, say "The ear splitting sound of diseline engines, foreign in this province until now" or something that fills it out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tough Love Posted May 28, 2005 Author Share Posted May 28, 2005 ah yeh, making up names and writing fictional stories was never really one of my strong points.....but i mean, confederates have been around for ever...not just starwars......i couldn't think of anything as for my education...i really dont have a formal one. ive got some books on drawing people and what not, i know i lack that part, but as it stands right now, i dont know if im going to really bother becoming a "real" artist....this is more for shits and giggles i guess. i know a lot of the stuff i do has mistakes here and there, but i dont have that much time to devote to drawing to become flawless or a lot better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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