ZiareONE Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 bump for critz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 In progress yo. I need some skin tone markers. Ziare, it looks alright. I don't dig the arrows too much, but you got decent letters. Freak, duse exchange is fire. Anybody wanna exchange? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoneTWS Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Well I've been writing for coming up on four years... I still do simples for the most part too. I'm just now starting to venture away from them. Obviously it was good that I waited too, because everyone so far seems to think my doodles are dope. PS: SMOOTH LINES I don't know why people are against doing simples, to me they are often the sickest things you see. A hot looking simple can burn a mediocre wildstyle. When you start going of into bullshit to early your stuff become illegible and bad looking. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prescription-rx Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 I think most of the problem people have with them is they aren't what "kings" do... And everyone knows every little kid who sees some graf when they venture out of the suburbs wants to be the "big bad king of the burbs". I'm finishing up some sketches now... They'll be posted later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prescription-rx Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Some shit I did at school today. Some kid kept bugging me about writing 'skeet' as 'skit' with a long i, so I gave in. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 zero progression fer da win! wendys is gay as fuck I did not invent the wheel I was the crooked spoke adjacent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Um... thanks but... That's the second time this has happened (but with a different writer) damn this is hot eba. shits awesome duse, i still love your stuff. its always nice and clean. props to the both of ya Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prescription-rx Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Final entry for the Resist battle... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 prescription... your letters aren't that bad, really. Still toy but solid. My advice? Don't overlap so much. Overlap is cool, but a good rule of thumb is that critical parts of the letter shouldn't be obscured. Also... props on the fresh character. Anyway, keep sketching. LYKE: thanks for the props, homie! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Some shit I did at school today. Some kid kept bugging me about writing 'skeet' as 'skit' with a long i, so I gave in. I like that first resist one. dope. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Ehh the A isn't aligned with the rest so it kinda throws it off.. and my I doesnt really fit with the rest. Any more crits please? I'm not too happy with this one :l Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Crits? For some reason i can't edit my last post so yeah, had to post again >_> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 keep working lose the pink backround Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 You might want to start drawing your pieces bigger on paper that doesn't bleed as much. It's hard to critique you without thinking it's messy. Any time you draw small, then blow it up big, and this goes for everyone, we see all those tiny shakes and quirks that get lost when they are too small to notice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Also... if you're not using water-based markers (like Crayola and Roseart) and instead using alcohol-based ones (like Sharpies, prismas, etc.) then you can do the dark colors first and it doesn't bleed like that. Otherwise, you need to do dark colors last since water-based WILL bleed like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MickeyFive Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 In progress yo. I need some skin tone markers. Ziare, it looks alright. I don't dig the arrows too much, but you got decent letters. Freak, duse exchange is fire. Anybody wanna exchange? Ba bumps. Donald, you're progressing son. haha, DonaldFour, MickeyFive. Get it? Somebody make a GoofyThree Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Okay E B A, aside from my crappy coloring, how are my letters though? Hehe.. I think I shoulda kept my lower case e on this one ._. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blart.BOS Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 i'm likin that except for the r cola Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoneTWS Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Donald - I'm in the same boat with the shaky lines, my hands are just naturally shaky and I don't know exactly why. It helps to go bigger. I have yet to find a way to really get my lines straight, but I need to write more, which currently I don't practice my letters nearly enough, so maybe thats what it takes. Also, as far as structure, the purple one is pretty decent. bambu - very solid. don't personally care for the 3d, I would have made it shorter, but thats a matter of personal taste. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendicott Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 the R doesnt look leik it fits.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 DONALD 4 AKA AGEIS WHATS UP!!!!!! Yeah guess who. Ive been waiting to see the progression. Nice stuff man, keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 No offense enigma but who are you o.o haha. thanks for the compliments though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Wow really? Arnet you Aegis from CALI. The skater... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 I'm from cali but I guess I'm a different aegis than the one you know.. >_> Cause I'm not a skater haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
commingup1 Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 heres a late update first of all man this shit is dope as hell!!!! props bro...but man i have been meaning to ask what do you use to do those outlines....those are some clean lines man pm me if you can..... thanks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 Work in progress. Crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 You're not being consistent with the letterforms... and shit is still hella messy. Did you consider going bigger like I suggested? It really might help it look better. If that doesn't work, you need to consider slowing down or something. It's all sketchy and not nice to look at. Sorry... don't mean to be so harsh. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 2, 2007 Share Posted December 2, 2007 And your 3D is way off. All over the place Try doing a drop shadow first. Then draw lines from the shadow to the piece and see if that helps. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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