ALERT NZ Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 this is the 1 for the DOWN battle havnt posted it there yet hahaha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmark187 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 alert-im feeling your shit. i like the alert piece and those boxes you had around your handies. i also am loving the down. shits looking good. cnue-dope throwies. i really like them im lookin for crits on some of my shit. trying to figure out where to go from here and what to work on. all crits will be returned. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture056.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture057-1.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture058.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture059.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v516/hillbilly159/Picture060-1.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 shitty camera Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmark187 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 kaos-i like the first one the most. i think you need to spend more time on simples and chill out with trying to make them too complex. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 kaos-i like the first one the most. i think you need to spend more time on simples and chill out with trying to make them too complex. thanx:) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Yp wut up ppls, heres a new charac for all y'all. By the way my bad earl, i can be semi-retarded sumtimes u know lol. hope y'all like the new charac.. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 p.s alert ur shit is hot too hot for u to be fuckin with whatever markers ur usin, PRISMA's my man trust me u owe it to ur letters. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 cola - sick character..did you use a reference or just freestyle? either way nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 mmark187 --that dream piece needs to be worked on. the letter overlapping isn't working right. the R, going into the E, looks like a duck's head. if you're going for that, then put some of that into the other letters as well. the bottom of the E, going into the A, doesn't work either. the ceptor piece isn't working either. you need to lose that arrow on top, and kill the connection with the T to the E. work on those letters a little more though. try and keep your letters even sized, unless there is a purpose for it. if you look at the ceptor piece, you'll notice the width on the letters fluctuates. try and keep that shit even with that style. also, fix the top of that C, that isn't really needed. keep posting. kaos --i couldn't really tell with them photos. sorry man, but you need to figure out your camera settings. it looks like you're shooting through an elderly woman's lenses. supacola --you've got a clean style with these characters. are you still working with letters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 I know, the stars are wack ha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmark187 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 mmark187 --that dream piece needs to be worked on. the letter overlapping isn't working right. the R, going into the E, looks like a duck's head. if you're going for that, then put some of that into the other letters as well. the bottom of the E, going into the A, doesn't work either. the ceptor piece isn't working either. you need to lose that arrow on top, and kill the connection with the T to the E. work on those letters a little more though. try and keep your letters even sized, unless there is a purpose for it. if you look at the ceptor piece, you'll notice the width on the letters fluctuates. try and keep that shit even with that style. also, fix the top of that C, that isn't really needed. keep posting. thanks a lot earl. i'll definitely be sure to take all that into consideration. ill work on something tomorrow and have it posted to try to improve my shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 so i did this little throw while we was smokin the peace pipe (a real peace pipe mind you, with rattle snake spine, antler, and coyote fur) but i didnt notice that i did it on the back of a real nice outline and i ruined the outline! crap. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Actually, I don't think the stars look that bad... HOWEVER, I advise you not to write "SCAR." SCAR is an ill freight bomber, still very active, with mad freights rolling all over the US. http://images.google.com/images?svnum=10&hl=en&q=scar+graff&btnG=Search+Images It's on you if you decide to still write SCAR but I think it's a bad idea. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 yea ur right. I dont know why I keep writin it, out of habit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 KNIM - that's is not a throw. Throws should be simple, usually made up of only a few lines. Look at the throwie thread for a better idea of how to execute a throw. Here's an example: http://www.graffiti.org/maseo/May01_Update/GRAFFITI/cal_throwie.jpg If you study it, you'll realize that for the letters themselves, homeboy only used TWO continuous lines. Everything else is secondary to the actual throwie itself... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 KNIM - that's is not a throw. Throws should be simple, usually made up of only a few lines. Look at the throwie thread for a better idea of how to execute a throw. Here's an example: http://www.graffiti.org/maseo/May01_Update/GRAFFITI/cal_throwie.jpg If you study it, you'll realize that for the letters themselves, homeboy only used TWO continuous lines. Everything else is secondary to the actual throwie itself... i know what a throw is. i guess i called this a throw cause i just did it real fast with no outline or anything. techinally its a simple but whatever? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 knim_one i dig it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 MnTc- Yh i did it straight off the top of my head, which i highly recommend cos it forces you to get a better understanding of the way the body works. Assuming uve already done some reference shit to recall Earl Broclo esq - Thanks man, yh im still doing letters but not so much recently been havin too much fun with the characs i guess. will get back to it soon tho, mayb post up a color piece or sumthing. But yo i havent seen any characs off o u recently man, post up soon. peace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 ehhh? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
support local lurker Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 go wild homie... the R is getting there, but throw some style.. practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hatch707 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 dream- if your gonna write dream you better come out real sick cuz dream1 was one of the best san francisco writers ever. Watch Piece By Piece and you will see... or change ur word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 go wild homie... the R is getting there, but throw some style.. practice. please be joking. i cannot go wild. im still just trying to play with my lettering Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mmark187 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 dream- if your gonna write dream you better come out real sick cuz dream1 was one of the best san francisco writers ever. Watch Piece By Piece and you will see... or change ur word. nah i dont write dream for real. i was just practiciing with other letters or words. im not putting that shit up anywhere. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 supacola --i do need to post up some shit soon. i called into work today sick, so maybe i'll flick some old stuff to post. i'm actually going to be painting live at some party this weekend. hopefully i don't make too much of an ass of myself. i'll post those flicks to be laughed at this weekend. keep going with your characters man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WEN? Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 anybody got anvice for on bands Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 hey cola im not one to talk shit but you're sayin i progress slow dude you've been workin on the same throw for months now rock some straight letters or some shit, i'm gettin my simples perfect then move on asshat don't talk shit when you can't and no i don't draw much sorry for commenting on your stuff i guess i wont next time... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal.method Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 anybody got anvice for on bands get the fuck out kid. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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