ALERT NZ Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 the latest one any crits?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 enlighten me: why are you posting int he toy section!? that's really really good... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALERT NZ Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 cos im trying to get as many crits as possible as i have finally found my own style so i need all the advice i can get to move foward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ijustgattaflowYO Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 i dig it alert. real stizzy doesnt belong here at all. i just dont like the little flames.... but thats the theme so i understand Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 hot shit, good style alert. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sp0CK1 Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 and then... crtis plz. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
m.d.m.a. Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 something simple...... first time posting...... constructive criticism please.... vokab. dm. sf. ia. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tragk Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 the latest one any crits?? this ALERT piece is fukin nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tragk Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 on 1 skateboard advice pleazz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 ALERT--your shit is good as always. SUPA --my name is earl broclo, not earl BRONCO. i didn't drive OJ away. also, i like the second character. but the first character looks like that choochie afro dude from american idol. the dude that was paired up with kelly clarkson. i hate that dude. he made a curve look straight. BOUNCING SOUL --the A in plague, looks just like the U. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 does any one wanna exchange with me, i write maz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 i'll do an exchange with you maz, i just don't know if i'll have time this week to really produce anything. you can either do EARL or DUPE. if you're feeling really productive, you can do EARL BROCLO ESQUIRE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 tragk --you've got good colors, clean lines, and your handstyle isn't all that bad. you just need to work on your letter structure. it's not horrible or anything, but it can use a little improvement. i don't exactly know how to word what you should do, maybe someone else can take on that task. keep going though, and keep posting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 tragk - you need to be doing straight-letter simples. Like this: http://www.shapelessmass.com/offsite/simple.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stil Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 critz? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kendoner Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 something simple...... first time posting...... constructive criticism please.... vokab. dm. sf. ia. ecstacy is fun Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 critz? you progress so fucking slow dude.... props and shit for doing simples but do you draw alot? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VILE_ATX Posted April 2, 2007 Share Posted April 2, 2007 cola ive seen... i dont know NO progression from you. stop bitchin at the kid Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronald McDonald Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 what do u guys think of these wild style attempts they all say elevate Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEZERone Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 somethin i did in 1st hour Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ijustgattaflowYO Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 ToYin around... anything? i shouldve made the R the same size at least.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
louise2wease Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Mcdonald - I like those wild styles for some reason. that'd be a pain n the ass to paint for sure ha. Hezer - Try bringing your letters closer together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stil Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 hey cola im not one to talk shit but you're sayin i progress slow dude you've been workin on the same throw for months now rock some straight letters or some shit, i'm gettin my simples perfect then move on asshat don't talk shit when you can't and no i don't draw much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 so it's sunday and im sippin' some lemonadeee repost because im such a big faggot. weaze. do simples. simple letters and learn letter structure and proportion so your shit doesn't look absolutely whack tragk. same goes for you that squiggleizzzzzzzzz piece, well, two of them, i dont remember by who. is just fucking gay alert nz-your shit is dope. keep it up and add some color to your stuff! im siked to see more stuff from you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Blegh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
earl broclo ESQ Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 HEZER --i'd like to see that when it's done. post more work as well, i like what i see. ALERT --i appreciate humble people, especially within graffiti culture. you're shit is on fire, and you're posting it in the toy thread. just keep posting that shit for everyone to see. it's good representation of style in this thread. WEASE --listen to CNUE. do some simple block letters for a little bit. your style now reminds me of the early 70's. i mean you can go with the retro style, but kids today will throw serious shit at you. if you really want to figure shit out, go look at advertisements. study the simple fonts designers use. shit like dunkin donuts, target, wal-mart, burger king. look at their logos or signage for inspiration. RONALD MCDONALD --i like the second one the most. are you going to color it? i'll be posting shit soon, i've just got a busy fucking week. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALERT NZ Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 Cheers Earl Broclo ESQ ill keep posting ive got another 1 today for the DOWN battle ill just load the photo up may be a while haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kaos Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 is there any1 from sac? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEZERone Posted April 3, 2007 Share Posted April 3, 2007 HEZER --i'd like to see that when it's done. post more work as well, i like what i see. aight thx 4 tha love due ill try and get some new stuff up Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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