[hc] aebis [ar] Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 any constructive criticism plz... sorry its a hollow never had any color markers -=/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dontsleep34 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 uhh yeah the shit in heres got promous im defently a toy on this site but ive been writing for a while now 5 years or so but i find this rule puts everything in prospective to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dontsleep34 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 its faze 1 ur shits pretty tight man for a rook Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 not as much as hearing ur next joke grow up mate. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 :cry: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jibbon Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 My first 2 sketches crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 :cry: doesnt that further prove my point, you intiated this, you implyed i couldnt paint the sketch i posted i can assure you i can, i will when i get money. now stop acting like your 11.jeez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 nope. lol nahh im just playin wit you. go back and read all the other posts kehd. go back and work on it mang. dont post till you really think you got somethin "Decent" but that first straight letter type shits pretty decent for a 1st sketch but still needs mad work. dont do throws yet till you get letters down mang. just work on your dead letters. keep on working. try to put all the letters closer together. its too far apart. and its too thin at places and too thick at other places. need to balance and make your letters poportional. practice with the word Rise but dont ever make that your word. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 fantastic... another rise in the toys thread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jibbon Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 i was asking for critisism,not smart arse comments Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zome_drb Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 the last one is da best zone, nice and simple, just get the positioning of ya letters right and improve the neatness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zome_drb Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Keep it up everyone else Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 position of letter like in same length apart right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 You shoulda put a capital E at the end crave, it woulda looked better Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i suck at capitals but i will try it BOUNCE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 Yeah, I meant for the last one btw just clearing that up if you didn;t know... Worked on my throw a little and decided to change the lowercase h to a capital so now its "He" 3d's screwed up some places but yeah Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 Yeah, I meant for the last one btw just clearing that up if you didn;t know... Worked on my throw a little and decided to change the lowercase h to a capital so now its "He" 3d's screwed up some places but yeah it's a sketch, make it neater, you have all the time in the world to make, even a quik dub, look ok. it's too sloppy, the letters seem intresting tho.:p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 nah i didnt say u couldnt i jsut said stop talking about painting it and jsut paint it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some_one Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 yeah., bouncing soul, just make it cleaner, and ink it out next time. crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i wasn't exactly being a smart ass file. i am also another rise in the toy thread as you can see. new sketch yo. critz critz critz, i like this one a lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 not saying its good, just stating i like it compared to some other sketches i have. critz... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i was asking for critisism,not smart arse comments smart ass comments are actual critisisim. who said anythin about critisism having to be positive? and kehd are you dumb? hows that a "smart ass comment"? i fucking gave you advice so your lil toy ass will actually have a starting point. if you dont think my ADVICE, NOT smart ass comments arent worth your time then get outta this thread. last thing i would want from a toy thread is a toy thats tryna run his mouth. i got more experience than you and im tryna help. this is what this thread is for. helping other but if you reject someones help and talk back than you dont deserve to be in this thread. now either grow up and respect people thats tryna help, or just dont even come on this thread or site anymore. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 yeah., bouncing soul, just make it cleaner, and ink it out next time. crits? the S, E and R is kinda hurting...especially that R cuz the rest for your letters are kinda circular and stuff but your R is move like a edgey type letter. for your E, extend the bottom part more. and i say loose the straight line part of the S and that arrow. one of the illest hands can be ones that are just clean and simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 smart ass comments are actual critisisim. who said anythin about critisism having to be positive? and kehd are you dumb? hows that a "smart ass comment"? i fucking gave you advice so your lil toy ass will actually have a starting point. if you dont think my ADVICE, NOT smart ass comments arent worth your time then get outta this thread. last thing i would want from a toy thread is a toy thats tryna run his mouth. i got more experience than you and im tryna help. this is what this thread is for. helping other but if you reject someones help and talk back than you dont deserve to be in this thread. now either grow up and respect people thats tryna help, or just dont even come on this thread or site anymore. lol oh shit...File MY BADDD. i thought you were talkin to me but you were talkin to that other kehd. sorry mannnnnnn, my fault. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jibbon Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 lol,np man,appreciate the advice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 lol aight aight...but keep on workin on your letters, wasnt that bad of a first sketch Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i wasn't exactly being a smart ass file. i am also another rise in the toy thread as you can see. new sketch yo. critz critz critz, i like this one a lot. critz anyone? im looking at you youngone hehe. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some_one Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 hey YoungonE, thanks alot for the crits, but yeah, i'll work onit, i was going to say about the R being all hard edged and the other letters more soft edged.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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