massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 i like it except tha extension on tha l, but i get what you were doing. it just seemed like somethin should go there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 can i get some crits, i posted on last page, didnt get any lern - i agree with what massgraff said, other than that and the R it looks good. ryke - everythins already been said. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 you got your head on straight man. keep doin what your doin. thats a nice straight. you made a slight error on tha right leg of tha 1st r but you did tha 2nd r well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 lol im actually zen ;) i just did that as an exchange for sharpies but thanks man :) lol i was starin at that and like...sharpies hasnt posted and then i was like OOOO lmao: ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 Alright thanks for the crit man. Ive just been sketching simples for the past week or so now. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 no prob. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 imso tired i wanna go to bed but i just cant stop sketchin haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 i see you saw that "i got caught this weekend" thread. hahahaha! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 lmao ya, i fuckin died laughin at that shit. im toy and ive never even been close to gettin caught taggin. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 yeah..bathroom stalls are hardcore shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 you know it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYKE Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 thanks for the crit guy, i'll post some more later today Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 if you've never been chased you're missing one of the most thrilling parts or writing. That shit is exhilarating. But i'm certainly not recommending going out and trying to get chased... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 haha i cant be chased right now, if i got caught id be SOL (which is why im not taggin at the moment) i have a broken leg haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 zen you should tone your handstyle down (think red already mentioned this), work with simple hands to get the flow of each letter... the radar looks pretty good (missed a little 3D on the a's, maybe thicken the middle bar a bit) and that one from ryke is 248975687934X better than the first one.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYKE Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 thanks sneekatoke here are some more Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ReSeM Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 lol practice. you need plenty of it. sorry couldnt resist the urge Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYKE Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 no prob, i just started yesterday... i gota longgggg path ahead of me XP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 use bars or you will never progress. Overlap and erase. do research in this thread for more advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anti-Zen Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 i dt it matters but u might wanna pick a tag... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 ha, a tag.. ..stay away from bubble letters (like the last 'simple') for now ryke, stick with fonts/ straight letters, this will help you to understand the little folds/cutins/etc you put on bubble letters... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RYKE Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 i dt it matters but u might wanna pick a tag... is sike already taken? cuz thats the name i would like, but when i signed up it wouldn't let me use it, so i did ryke (like reich) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted October 20, 2010 Share Posted October 20, 2010 just pick some letters you can do good, you will probably end up changing your name alot like i did. sike is probably done by a lot of people, do whatever you want. just dont have the same name as some dude in your city Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltine Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 1st try at this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
massgraff Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 NICEEE. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatol Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 Just startin out with this...Some advice would be cool, keep the negatives positives...as in dont bash for being a toy and shit please. joined this site so i can learn!!! Not have ppl down my throat saying stop trying or give up, or get outta here. So a simple, and a bad bad tag, im toy and i know the tag is bad... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tuco Salamanca Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 stop trying, give up and get outta heaa. nah btw, thats not a simple :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 ^thats why this thread is here man... ...you need to stay away from bubble letters at the moment, do simples like the fonts on a computer. this will help you to understand letter structure/flow... ..as for the handy, keep it simple like you have, and just try stuff... maybe move the letters closer.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fatol Posted October 21, 2010 Share Posted October 21, 2010 right its a throwie. lmfao my bad. and keep it simple, well i could sit and draw keyboard letters, but they are square and boring, how do i proceed from those square letters? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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