freakeenyc Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 shit man! poost that shit in the beantown thread. i still gotta find taht white gel pen that u have. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 i got a new sketch for the beantown thread, just gotta ink it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
graflove Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 post Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 n8, my E is fresh son, come on. i still havent seen u post anything u drew? its kinda hard to listen to someone if u never seen how they throw down ya know Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 n8, my E is fresh son, come on. i still havent seen u post anything u drew? its kinda hard to listen to someone if u never seen how they throw down ya know im hoping you aren't serious... your whole piece is bad, not just the E. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 lol thanks for the heads up on that!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 can almost guarentee u guys are some westcoast dudes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OarsoneSBOS Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 that W is ill. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha.Shark Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 ledgend Chinny Amere Con has a glass chin and is not a legend :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 any more critss on my stuff? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 scoer, ur shit is nice and clean. keep workin on tweakin ur letters a lil bit more each time u write. nice fills though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 fucked up with the 3d again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 hippo....you are an idiot. kote im feelin the top one except i would maybe change up the O and not have that little thing sticking out on the top left, and i like the T on the bottom one more. your stuff looks good tho keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 woooord..... hows that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 because u dont take advice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 finally, an honest and intelligent answer Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 i'm from boston you fuck, go to bombing science, they really appreciate the geniuses over there :lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 thank you hungriest hippo., i dont get all this hate, everytime you do a sketch it gets better and it seems youve done simples , i think all you people just need to appreciate different styles.,and if you see something wrong then say it but dont give usless comments Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 here goes: SCOE - your first one (yellow) is not proportionate. The o has about even bars, while the center bars on the s and c for example are skinnier. the 2nd (white) one is choppy and the top of the c is thick, like someone said. better though. the last one has some disproportion as well, like the center s and e bars, and the s is leaning to the left. dig the simple fill though. SAW - needs at least one arrow man, c'mon this is GRAFFEETY, BRO. but it is dope. KOTE - take that wing off the o or at least curve the right bar, it makes it look like a u. also, the thing to the left of the last k doesn't fit in, the curve bar is too skinny. JEG - you should just do simples, but if you want to know whats wrong with it: 1. your random extentions. Those bump things on the g and j don't seem to make sense. 2. your letters are disproportionate. The middle bar on the e is skinny, the top j bar is weird, too. 3. your 3-d is off. The lines go all over the place... 4. the floaters dont really flatter the piece, it makes it look worse by not making sense as well and being choppy. 5. your lines are choppy, sometimes the 2 sides of a letter dont match, for example. 6. what is that thing going into the g? It is random and blah blah blah... 7. whats up with the forcefield? It's all lumpy by the g and stuff, are those supposed to be bubbles? If so, they don't look like it. oh and not from the west coast... 3rd coast... still better than CT though... ha-ha. In all seriousness, though, dont take advice as hate, people here are sometimes annoyed by toys, but ALWAYS HATE a toy with an ego that wont take advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 thank you for that., i see what your talking about, on the first two i posted i was going for the s and o to kind of match, and the c and e to match.,im just trying to fix my letters slowly every new sketch i do 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
front line Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 started practicing 3d after a long minute.... which is better 1,2 or3 2 but they all have style Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 can almost guarentee u guys are some westcoast dudes We may be west coast dudes and beef a alot, but at least we got styles....:eek: /no beef Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 its not perfect but its the most complex fill ive done. well.... bring on the hate... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 That background, cloud fill is wack. It doesn't conform to the letters, and forcefield Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 3d is off proportions are all off random extensions are wtf style of the j doesn't even match the g Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 i was told by REAL heads that graf isnt to be judged. its not a "contest", that if ur happy wit wat u did than thats that. im happy wit it. thanks for the drafting lesson though... lol nah its cool. im used to it from u guys already Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doodle Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 just stop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n8galicia Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 sik burner then Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 its supposed to be different man, thats how u create ur own style, not from havin other people tellin u wat u should do, come on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
setokeno Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 well gonna do some more stuff try it it out thatns for crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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