BosiOne! Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HOCKEY Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 Hockey I'm not a fan of that style the extensions are all over the pllace and it doesn't flow work more on the letters YEA...SHIT LOOKS TO SLOPPY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Cult~ Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 i lik jeso style, very hot check mine: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 simples Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Cult~ Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 ^ are u tell me to do simples? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnneh7 Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 it would look that way, yes. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Cult~ Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 ^ still dont get it though... my letter arnt simple enough? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 i like it man the colors are good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 and yo that yaie is lookin pretty good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 ^ still dont get it though... my letter arnt simple enough? no, simples like they look here - CULT. get your basic letters and 3d down first before doing anything else. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snore one* Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 dope shit alts love those drips Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veritably Clean Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 back in school 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Cult~ Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 thats man, i get it now Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 np. nice one sank. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Polyp Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 feelin that "K" sank, Yamie - shit lookin good improvement Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuce4 Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 If youd ask me,teso,go simples and yamie i advice you too to work simpler. Sank i liked it some mine shit.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BosiOne! Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 [/img] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gray matter Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 imo you should drop the o. the JES look decent but the O is way off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BosiOne! Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 ya im still tryin to work the o shits pissin me off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 If youd ask me,teso,go simples and yamie i advice you too to work simpler. Sank i liked it some mine shit.... think you shoulda chilled out on the fill a little. kinda hard to read. and i think you should tone down your letters just a bit too. but youre on the right track, it looks alright. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 [/img] IMO it looks like you look for inspiration by looking at other writers when you draw.. cause every sketch has been a different style. if this is the case, just do your own thing man. start off with your own basic letters and bend em/style em your own way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
somekat Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 fuck dropping a letter, add an e to the end Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BosiOne! Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 thx for the advice bro ya i look at some work but i usually just have diff ideas pop in my head each time i sketch up stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 crits? bump for more crits and 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 I'm liking the outline donald, work on that more and should have a nice flow to it, not a fan of the blue one tho, the I looks weird and the proportions seem off to me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 yeah i know what you mean about the I. I tilted it like that to match the Y, and the tilt on the Y was unintentional but i had already filled it in so i couldnt fix it haha. so i figured i might as well tilt something else to balance it out a little Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decyferon Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 I would definitely say to work the top outline more I reckon that could be progressed into something real dope and flowing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 love the first one donald!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted September 5, 2009 Share Posted September 5, 2009 I would definitely say to work the top outline more I reckon that could be progressed into something real dope and flowing yeah for sure. thanks man. haha the bottom one was just a simple i was doing outta boredom Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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