Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 Garw, what have you been doing man? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garw Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 Garw, what have you been doing man? went on the mountain and came back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 Well I haven't been on here..Befor but since I know Im toy. Ill post in here. ^^^^Crits? Kest- Nice flow, but the lil exstra stuff on the K I think you could do with out. Sim- Your O is whack...Im not feeling it. It dosent fit the style you are working toward. Honestly I think this has potential.. The D and the A are done nicely in my opinion, the only things I don't like is the I and the K. The flames arent done terribly on the D and A, and you seem to have decent structure so far. But for now just work on the letters first, and then when you have those down with a nice flow, you can add the flamey stuff on there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 :D ...man the top arm of your first h is hidden behind the p too much..same with the second one an the T..the e looks a lil akward cause of the extension on top...imo it might work better as a E instead.. the T kind of overpowers the rest of the letters too...my lettering is pretty wack but i been workin on comp fonts to help with it. I like the color scheme, an the concept of the piece tho... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yetsio Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supra Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 i know this shit is wack. i did it in class wat u think though?? O.o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 the thing on the bottom of the L is a big no-no, dosent fit, at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 17, 2009 Share Posted June 17, 2009 the thing on the bottom of the L is a big no-no, dosent fit, at all. QFT. **Note: QFT stands for Quoted For Truth.** Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 alex, the bottom right of the ALE are kicked almost symmetrically. If you can work the X into that same pattern, it might improve the flow. Maybe add a little kick upward like on the bottom right of the L onto the bottom right of the X. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 alex, the bottom right of the ALE are kicked almost symmetrically. If you can work the X into that same pattern, it might improve the flow. Maybe add a little kick upward like on the bottom right of the L onto the bottom right of the X. I see what you're gettin' at. I think he was tryin' to match the X with the A though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 ^ in that case, it should curl under a little more like the left leg of the A. That would look good too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 ^ in that case, it should curl under a little more like the left leg of the A. That would look good too. Excellent eye. +Props to you, bro. You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to redeyedanimal again. Damnit!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 hahaha. Thanks bro. Props for props. Tryin to get you out of the red. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 some exchanges I did on another site. sorry for the bad quality. my scanner doesn't work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNH.Sunk Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Did this other day in class. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 that's the smallest fuckin picture i've ever seen. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNH.Sunk Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 I can't find a site that will blow it up. It always comes out small. fuck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNH.Sunk Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 I cant find a site that will blow it up. wtf. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 What site are you using? I use photobucket.com, it's easy to edit and post pics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UNH.Sunk Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 I didn't mean to triple post. And I think its this horseshit webcam. I'll just use a real camera later. :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silba Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Yeahh good idea :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 some exchanges I did on another site. sorry for the bad quality. my scanner doesn't work. bump Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 so many sunk's jeeeeez. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wickerman21 Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Good enough? Or is it back to simples again? =\ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D4real Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 so many sunk's jeeeeez. so many sunk's, what's dat mean? and wickerman21, I say back to simples 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 hahaha. Thanks bro. Props for props. Tryin to get you out of the red. Haha, thanks man. Once it allows me to, I'll hit you back with some +Props. :D And by "so many Sunk's" I think he means that SUNK posted like...4 times in 20 minutes, haha. Wickerman: I think you need to go back to simples. Not to be harsh, but you need to develop some more structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 no i mean so many people write sunk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kuuuumar Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 nice shok. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ding2007 Posted June 18, 2009 Share Posted June 18, 2009 hope you ppl help me get better quick one http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3325/3607760900_d2137560ef.jpg and some quicky freestyle tryout.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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