dreaken1993 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 username, do you feel the need to comment on EVERYTHING? Is it a bad thing? I don't know...I just have nothing to do right now. It's hot as hell in here, pouring rain outside, and I can't concentrate enough to sketch because of the humidity... Sorry. If it bothers you, I'll stop. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Is it a bad thing? I don't know...I just have nothing to do right now. It's hot as hell in here, pouring rain outside, and I can't concentrate enough to sketch because of the humidity... Sorry. If it bothers you, I'll stop. no dude its fine. its just on everything in this thread haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 no dude its fine. its just on everything in this thread haha. I like my opinion to be heard. Besides, I am usually helping...most of my posts are helpful in some way or another, or they are about general small talk with the other "members" of that certain thread, such as this one. I'm just naturally energetic and talkative. Plus, I have within me the spirit of helping people...when somebody asks for crits I give them crits...then it turns into a little conversation with two or three other people, haha. That and my posts look long and complicated seeing as I use proper grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc...it's a pet peeve of mine. EDIT: can anybody give me some positive rep? According to my rep - thinger I'm going to be banned soon...actually it went up slightly, but it's still in the red zone which makes me uneasy...I don't want to have to make a new account. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 colored Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Personally, I like the choice of colors, but opinions do vary. I still notice the problem with the add - ons though. Overall, it's not half bad. Keep it up, man! Oh, and your handy needs maaaaaaaad work, bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 those handys fucked up. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 those handys fucked up. lol Yeah, they're mad sketchy, haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 finished my piece....not good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashing young and bold Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 FML Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dashing young and bold Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 quit killin my shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StreetLurker Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 JS bomb. Im gettin the hang of illustrator:P Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bome[BnS] Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 So only been writing for maybe 2months need some crits. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 try doing simples... like BOME use bars to build letters, don't be afraid of the eraser keep width consistent throughout the piece dont use color yet, or arrows, or a 3d just do an outline in pencil of your outline... get basic structure down first holmes... maybe in a year or two you can do addons and connections. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kummeli Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 some crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Kumelli: watch those extensions. Add too many (as you did) and it make a painting look like shit (no offense). Dashing and Bold: your shit is tight, man! Keep that shit up! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 tryin to learn how to do extension and hook-ups. any advice?? this is nice except i think your extensions could use some improvement liek you said... and i think you should sketch your letters bigger or make them a little taller, like your P's and R's always look really cramped in your sketches. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Yeah, I agree with that. The R in this picture especially looks really crammed into the sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 colored It looks like you've a bigger space between the 0 and the 7 than you do between the 3 and the 0. I realise that you've tried to fill up this negative space with some extensions off your 0, but you'd be better off tightening things up and forgetting the extensions. Otherwise, I like the structure. The colours are good but the border has too much pink in it to nicely compliment the green and the red-it kinda clashes. I dunno if it was a purple marker and it just went up that colour, but blue may have been a better choice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Nice catch there, FATL. The pink makes it pop off of the page, but now that you mention it, it does make it look a bit funny because of the green. Blue would've looked a lot better. But hey, you live and you learn. Practice, practice, practice. Good crit, by the way. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest theDRIVER Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 FML need crit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 thanks alot flying. good crits for sure. didnt know if i shudda used the blue or not. i was debating and went with pink haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 Driver: some of your lines are a bit shaky, and the T doesn't have the same width as the rest of the letters. Also, the arms of the T aren't lined up with one another. Other than that it looks dece. EDIT: does your rep realyl get you banned? If so, I think I'm done for...people keep nega-propping me and I'm past ban-level. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flying above tree level Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 ^Dude, maybe just don't post as much. Or maybe only check once a day. I mean, you've been on this forum how long and you've got 120 posts? Have you posted any sketches? Not hating-like everyone else, I appreciate your input 'cos you seem to say some pretty solid stuff, but just if you're trying to understand the nega-props from peeps... And Maker, I always have trouble with colours. Do you use a colour while? Someone posted one on here a while ago, I found it pretty helpful. Oh, and if you want to exchange, get at me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 i know my colors pretty well. i memorized the color wheel when i was in art class. lol what do you write? ill get you one. i owe alot of people an exchange tho. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 FATL: I suppose taht could be why...though that's a dumb reason to give somebody a negative. As long as it doesn't ban you I could care less. As for sketches...I've posted a few, but not many. I have to take them with my cell and half of the time they never even send to my e-mail to post them and shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 You're giving people advice?:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
This is my Username Posted May 28, 2009 Share Posted May 28, 2009 You're giving people advice?:D What's so bad about my sketch?! :p Besides, the mistakes that are in there are mistakes that I'm aware of. I've never given bad advice to anyone. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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