wordisborn212 Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 freakee everythings nice but the A is kinda odd and too much noise on the left side of the piece. other than that try to keep the same width of all those crazy arrows, overall sick and good color choice, but maybe put in a crazy color forcefield or smthing idk maybe not actually Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 ^^if ur talkin bout that piece freak posted a few up, thats mine not his, but thanx for the feedback anyway lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poko Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 ^^ i like, well heres a new sketch ill post the fiished product later Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 uhh neuro your not a toy. gtfo recent FUCKING SHITTY Simples god damn :-| i need mucho helpo with my handstyle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wordisborn212 Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 haha yea SERIOUSLY nuero ur making us look bad, and define ur hand for ur tag isnt bad if thats what u were concerned about, nuero i like the shit u posted right before ur most recent alot better than the most recent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 YEAH! das good define... try cutting the 3d off a little. and smoothen the D out. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 alright thanks man. for like teh next couple o' weeks ima just draw the letters on my keyboard. all will be slightly different. no need for color right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 finished quick...got bored Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 6, 2007 Share Posted December 6, 2007 i like it a lot, a little too many arrows on top. thats just my opinion. well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 uhh neuro your not a toy. gtfo recent FUCKING SHITTY Simples god damn :-| i need mucho helpo with my handstyle. um the d's inner right is awkward..the e's good, but the f and the other e dont match it...ie the middle of the 2nd e is not the same....and the f's second horizontal line is not on the same level as the e's and finally the n's bigger than the other letters....just sum advice...but its still good enigmatic...theres a dude who writes engma is paris...u can see his stuff on the 4th page of Horfe thread on brickslayers...just thut ud like to no...cuz i like to see how the other "freaks" are doing ..so they dont bite me or vice versa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
each Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 nah i wouldnt bother with color yet define... i mean you could for giggles, but then all the time you spent doing that could be spent drawing more... those simples arent bad at all, what your doing here is learning what makes a letter... foundations for letters, also spacing... i get my spacing from years of graphic design you just develop a sense of where things are that look good to you, like parrallel parking a car, you know? i see you have issues with curves. keep at those, again graph paper might help to train your hand to eye... oh and define!! i still see sizing differences from left to right... not to harp, just a point out, kid look at the size of the d compared to everything else, then look at the N the same way Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 new name.. you likee? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 so true, i have noticed that i do that. just lettting you guys know, until now, i have never done off the wall sketches or anything. i alwasys draw to the floor because it is so much easier for me. For example, i i was to paint a train, i would have to go to the end of the side, not a floating one, im trying to work on this. for some reason i find it so hard developing the bottoms of letters. lol wtf. oh well. thanks guys, and good night. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 bambu or should i say basoj! i like everything about it. <period. maybe we can get a little exchange goin?? pce. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 its bosdj brother. and yeah i'll throw something together for yah.. define? defi? what should i try. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 im gonna do a defi. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 the balance is kinda fucked but i like it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 Man... is it just me or does Bambu get like 100% better with each sketch he posts? Them cracks is perfect, son. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 define is finally doing it right... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WorldBench Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 define that "N" is too big for the whole thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLESt Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 the "bosoj" looks alright some stuff i misplaced in the sketch thread meh... crits welcome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 Anroe... this isn't up to your usual level of quality. The 3D is off a bit here and there all over. I say that with the understanding that you usually come with the heat and so that raises my expectations. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JakeBaumer44 Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 Bambu: really feeling the Bosdj peice. I like the Defi also, except there is something off about where the F and the I overlap. It caught my eye right when i saw it. not really sure what though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 Anroe... this isn't up to your usual level of quality. The 3D is off a bit here and there all over. I say that with the understanding that you usually come with the heat and so that raises my expectations. i kno...i fell off...again...lol:lol: :( Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 eh bambu thanks for the sketch. i will make u one too! :D what should i write for you? bambu or bosdj? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bambu Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 Bambu: really feeling the Bosdj peice. I like the Defi also, except there is something off about where the F and the I overlap. It caught my eye right when i saw it. not really sure what though. yah.. the overall balance isnt great. the F overlaps the I a little too much. and the the D is leaning to the left. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 everybody go and vote for the CENTER battle Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DM! Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 ok heres a couple o new simples: and here is my current stash. the reason for posting, is that tomorrow, i wanna go do a big bomb at this chill place. I wanna know what color skeme i should do. ive only been doin black and white stuff so far but i wanna do 2 colors. would this look good? > like the DEF be white and INE be black, outlined in red or purple? tell me what combos i should do. or just black and white. thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hypergraphia Posted December 7, 2007 Share Posted December 7, 2007 that dust mask you have there isnt gonna help you much Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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