xmothradbx Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 here, for a friend, critz please critz or tips please seems to thin in places other then that; its on point. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 thanks dudes ^^ ill post more soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sole-One Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 LMAO, i did! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xmothradbx Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 carbon, The structure looks nice; i like the extensions somewhat; I think you might of over done it a little bit on the C. Also; one of the things that Satire pointed out to me way back; is that when you use an arrow; have them going in the same direction to it gives a directional flow to the piece. Seriously though; its looking good; put some 3d on it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bac Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 draft the orange piece is tight Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MnTC Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 people are actually commenting on peoples shit now? wow, im suprised Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
destination5 Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 DRAFT I LIKE THAT ORANGE PEICE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dripuk Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 well i havent been on here in a while. but ive got a new name now for certain reasons. crits would be apreceated [ATTACH]57442.vB[/ATTACH] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 dripuk, what u did all the time? and what does it say? yos4? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dripuk Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 ah ive just been busy doin this an that. it says yoda, the d's a bit screwed tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaftie Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 fuck bombingscience. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 ronald mcdonald, whats the first letter of ur throw? and dripuk, i can see yod now but in what way is the A an A? it looks like a four.. and sole, the C looks like the C that cope makes. and draft, i dont like the orange one, the f and t are a bit goofy and i cant see the R.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 here ya go bouncing some self biting in this... i hate k's Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 hey loaftie, dont write loaf his a detroit tagger and his way better then u, and yes he does freights 2 and duse that exchange is fresh...simple but yet nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 here ya go bouncing some self biting in this... i hate k's bumpin for new page Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xmothradbx Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 That looks really nice; the E is a bit big; but but looks gooood! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BluntHead$ Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 any!! advice will help Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted May 20, 2007 Share Posted May 20, 2007 ill color the piece later i kinda hate it what do yall think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 its weird man, you got some fresh letters hidin in there, but i dunno just basics are lacking placement, proportion etc. practice shit simple as possable to work on gettin the basics down then start throwin conections and shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 DRAFT- i like the orange piece. just flows nice duse- your style is still clean as fuck enigmatic- its decent but needs work to make it flow a little better... i would ditch the kw4 out of the piece though. just doesnt look like it belongs at all. this is my hand ive developed for the new name. i like it but i doubt none of you do. the top right one.. i know i fucked up the R. but w/es idk why my hand went all retard. i have a couple other variations of course: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaftie Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 i know and i love his style! i dont even like my throw its too drippy. but i just felt like posting it, its toy so it belongs here. i dont write loaf anymore. :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 :mad: you need to step backand take a looks at yourself. your a clown kid. I bet mad kids that are autistic and blind burn you anyday:lol: . know your role,stay iun the house and ask momy for a ride to blick so you can buy some beltons with money from your chores. peace...........:cool: that was pretty typical. i wish when the inventors of the internet created this shit, they thought about kids like you on it and how much you'd ruin such a useful invention. and what the fuck is blick? and who the fuck are you? for real kid, haha. who are hell are you. i "know my roll" and am comfortable enough "with my roll" to provide the props and criticism where it is needed, usually always in a relatively nice fashion compared to other writers on this messageboard, (i.e. YOU) peace sucka. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
movementsmagazine Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 ill color the piece later i kinda hate it what do yall think? ehh go simpler. a few of the extentions aren't bad, but then there are some that are really bad. try simpler shit and maybe throw in a SMALL amount of "extensions", post that shit, and we'll see how it looks/hopefully youll get advice on that. ps. stop going into the boston thread and talking shit to heads who 1) have been in this game since you were in preschool and 2) who could burn you, me, and over half of 12oz. DUSE- that shit is good, just the N looks a bit like the H. i wanna see bouncingsoul's exchange for you, it's bound to be good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrackBombPaint Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 yeah enigma i like that as well, no advice here from me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
enigmatic Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 ehh go simpler. a few of the extentions aren't bad, but then there are some that are really bad. try simpler shit and maybe throw in a SMALL amount of "extensions", post that shit, and we'll see how it looks/hopefully youll get advice on that. ps. stop going into the boston thread and talking shit to heads who 1) have been in this game since you were in preschool and 2) who could burn you, me, and over half of 12oz. DUSE- that shit is good, just the N looks a bit like the H. i wanna see bouncingsoul's exchange for you, it's bound to be good. thanks for the advice, but i was not talking shit at all, i was actually being really respectfull and aknowldeged that they were all in the game actually since i was in preeschool and are all better than me. i was actually pm'd by one of them and he said i shouldnt let it get to me but to stop posting in the thread, and that i wasnt half bad for the time ive been writing but just to stay out of there way. just to clear up any misunderstanding i mean no harm or foul to the boston cats. mad respect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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dusetwo Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 sup Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lykeomgz Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 why is he choppin down on his spliff haha just kidding duse. any comments on my handy anyone? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KLAS Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 Im diggin the a and the s. Maybe tone it down a little til you get the hang of your k's and r's. Once you got one you pretty much got the other. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KLAS Posted May 21, 2007 Share Posted May 21, 2007 Word. Keep the A and the S. Ks and Rs are tricky but once you got one you got the other... for the most part. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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