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Live and in colour!!! crits please. i gotta say the streak on de P is really annoying me.....

 

umm this was a decent attempt at 3d but you failed at the most important part which is letter structure, your first 2 letters are "joined" together and then you got the other dudes chilling behind it, which wouldnt fly even in the traditional sense. Keep all your letters seperated and try to keep a consistent overall shape or structure, dont blend letters together until you know what your doing-

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I like how your keeping it simple but you still got to much going on, your extensions arent consistent and the one between the R and E is especially awful, your letters all have a similar style but the structure is not to clear and it needs work. I would do a few simplier versions of this style before I moved further-

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