=SALE= Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 nice man~~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wetdreams Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 :confused: to me, not that i have seen your other stuff, i like it. I might just like it cause when it comes down to throwups im a fuckin retard and most are better than me at simplicity. but either way, nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wetdreams Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 This is very true, graff is more observation for a new jack then anything else, its the only way i Got better, I think that was the biggest transitional step for to see why that piece is dope and hwy you like it, break each piece down WHY its dope not just oh rime did it it looks dope just cause. ANALYZE it. It helps alot becuase you can then look at your own work and see whats wrong with your own work, you can see yourself. Its important to analyze simpler work, just cause something is simple doesn mean its not dope. Kuma, A lot of toronto heads. Raels, King157, CAUSR (some styles of causr's not alll), REGAL the list goes on and on, look at simple work and work your way up. this dude is right. ill add onto this and say that letter proportioning is a big part of what makes something look tight. By that i mean that lines, thickness, and all that shit have to relate perfectly and shit. Also cleanliness goes a long way. if you look at a raels piece, like this dude said, it is so fuckin clean and proportioned perfectly. Another tip, and adding on to what these other dudes said, start with tags, then do strait letters. I started piecing with more complicated letters and it fucked me up in the long run because i had proportioning problems that i didnt even realize. I was treating letters like any other drawing, and over all they arnt. well i hope this little rant helped. if it doesnt make any sense, or if you already knew all this then i suppose you read this for nothing and im sorry, but i have been up for atleast 36 hours and im about to passout. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wetdreams Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 cola, the throw is looking nice, but if youre gonna have 'holes' in the bottom parts of ZEK, you should make a gap in the S too, make the letter more the same a gap and a knob on the S, since it just looks slightly out of place cuz the other three letters are so similar. didnt even notice, this dude is right on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Genome Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 New Throw!! Crits? You have to work on your fonts first, bro. Then you need to work on your overlaps, overlays, and connections. These barely even look like letters, and these "letters" barely even look like they have anything to do with another. And I know in the beginning it's easy to overlap all your letters the same, left to right, like you read, but you have to get off that, too. Also, get a decent sketchbook, and some decent (but cheap for now) markers. And practice lettering and spacing before you start hammering out words. Keep it up. -Genome Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 im kinda confused.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 fuck that man that felt throw is nice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wetdreams Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 that felt throw isnt bad, there is relationshit between all the letters, the t strays the most, but there is relationship. who really cares about a throwup though. its only meant for getting your name up, its not means to be pretty. if i were you i would work on your tag though, the f and e dont mesh at all, but thats just my oppinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renk_one Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 you got the artistic skills for damn sure, but letter structure is lackin yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 mint drawing son.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 can i have some feed bk on this? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 http://viewmorepics.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=viewImage&friendID=134274851&albumID=0&imageID=2664134 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 not showin up yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 there...tell me what ya fink its nothing big..just wanna no what ya fink Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 nice aton tag dont make the left of the v that wide make all the letters the same size and like on a line the n seems like its falling off Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 cheers cola :P sorry about postin it again i dint mean tooo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 cola ive just done another....see if you fink its betta i did letters on a line... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nottz Posted February 18, 2007 Share Posted February 18, 2007 cola ya recken thats better wi letters... n they on a line...????? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 ^^ STOP POST WHORING then, actually spend a lil bit of time on it. and try doing some simples because that looks like shit :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dryst Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 the first peice is a random drawing i colored :-) the second 1 is the valentine themed battle, cupid and the last one is a piece i did for valentines day for my girl, it says amy crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
geedorah Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 duse dood, you got that shit on lock! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 this shit is fresh! i love black fills. i can imagine this wall stomping somewhere Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mince Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 cola ya recken thats better wi letters... n they on a line...????? not being a dick man, but whats the point in posting a hallow sketch right after you posted the same shit with a fill;):confused: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KRUM Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 This threads funny cause its like watching a bunch of retards talking about how good they are at extreme wheelchairing while there are actually crippled people and babies learning how to walk out there in the world. YALL SHOULD THINK ABOUT THE CRIPPLES AND THE BABIES FOR ONCE. *sniff sniff* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tango 24 Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 not for real real just for play play Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
noath Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AToke1 Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 First post, might as well figure out if im considered toy here or not... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 19, 2007 Share Posted February 19, 2007 Dope ^^ try that shit in the big boy thread.. sumthing Hepos helped me with.. Crits.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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