josefstrat@yahoo.com Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 ^^^I like your stuff alot. I'd like to see it on a wall. I know this is paperchase, but why not a pic or two of a wall? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Well, right now I'm on vacation but I know this chill bank where I can practice so I'll get some flicks when I get back... Only like 9 more days anyway Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadra666 Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 bump for crits again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Does it say Masoe? I like your M, but the rest of your letters are fucked up... Try and keep them like all the same size like your S is just like half the size of everything else. The little orange dude next to the E bring attention away from the piece since it stands out so much so try to keep it like a complimenting color... Even better, don't add one at all. Focus on your letters more and you'll get it eventually... I might be able to do a sketch for you if you want. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Shit, I accidentally posted the link to my throwie on the last page... What I meant to post was this :edit: And to shifter, watch Style Wars over and over again... Watch it like everyday at least once you ass clown, watch it every day at least once. what the fuck for?? watch it a few times yea but not like once every day, it doesnt give you tips..... if you want inspiration watch Stockholm Subway Stories, thats a good 'un. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Haha, I was jokin. I watch it a lot though, like every week cuz it's awesome :edit: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 even once a week is too much, make friends with experienced writers in your area and get them to help you. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Well, I'm not really in that big of a city. I'm just gonna wait till school starts and maybe I'll find someone who writes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 good evening everyone. new sketches YO! critz critz critz... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 Yay, I love nice simple shit. People in this thread should be doing stuff like that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 .... yea change the R to a P then your tag with be PIES.;) us toys should post more stuff painted on walls, i mean i know it's paper chase but it's so easy to draw an immense piece but it's hard to paint it. i try to stick to simple designs i can paint; like this. collabo comment. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 i like pies. maybe i will start writing pies... haha is anyone liking my sketch though? yes, no? ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 make it simpler ries! you need more flow Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strikehonor Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 beginning basic handstyle, critiques? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unreal1 Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 beginning basic handstyle, critiques? bent is taken and let alone probally the easiet word to make look decent, how you made it look that bad is beyond me... keep sketching dumbass dont post you're stuff on this thread, use that time to sketch. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 lets see it painted the jelser? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 and im sorry but that shit aint basic at all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 mmm. i still dont really understand what flow is. is that just another word for style? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 flow is liek letter structure...letters that goes along very well and fits smoothley in the word. all letters fit nicely, poportional and smoothley in the word. ya feel meeeee? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jelser Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 lets see it painted the jelser? buddy i can paint that, i wasnt taking the mick earlier when i said the thing about paintin it. im broke at the mo, when i do ill def post it. i bet you're looking forward to it too;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
funky fresh Posted August 13, 2006 Share Posted August 13, 2006 not as much as hearing ur next joke Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spade561 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 SHIFTER: Acquire the following books, available at you local Barnes'N'Nobles/Borders: The Art Of Getting Over, by Stephen Powers [<~~ESPO] Dondi White: Style Master General Freight Train Graffiti (Really just because a lot of writers write a bit about the lifestyle. Please don't take that as me saying to hit trains.) Books to find elsewhere: Autograf AllCity Really anything graff related. The key ones art The Art of Getting Over, and Dondi White. The Art... gives a TON of key history that is ESSENTIAL, and Dondi White is about one specific king, but gives a lot of information about coming up. I know I preach The Art... to everyone like it's the Bible, but that's because it's SO vital. RIES: Please don't write RIES. There's already an old school king who writes REAS, and when you say them they come out the same. People will hate on you for it. Other than that, I like that you keep it simple. You're headed in the right direction. HEXA: Damnit!! You were doing SO good, but now I just feel like you're trying too hard. I can definitely see developement though. I think the one thing you REALLY need to work on, is proportion. Stay up guys. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spade561 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 HEXA!! I just had an epiphany. I think you need to study up on ZEPHYR. You seem to have similar ideas to his. I'm seriousssssssssssss get on that. I think you will VASTLY improve. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
llxseanxll Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 I know it's real simple, but i kept tryna good shit wit my name (DiZ.), and it only looked good when it was simple and clean. BTW it's with ma new graphics tablet, so that's prolly why it's all pixely. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
its faze 1 Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ POINTERS^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strikehonor Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 it was beat not bent Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 yeh i feel you youngin. thnx lad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 Yo, thanks spade, Zephyr's been one of my fave's for a looooong time now, but it's been a while since I've seen any of his stuff. I'll go check it out again. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
[hc] aebis [ar] Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 http://i29.photobucket.com/albums/c251/hc_AEBIS_ar/aebis8.jpg Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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