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MarzOne

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the M is weak....i like the coloures but it look too cluttered,a nd shits just poppin outta no where..but just give'r and we'll see results

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the A and Z are pretty cool but the M and R are weak. simplify it and work on just the letters. do ad ons later. keep it simple homie.

my 2 cents.

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that whole things weak. once you remove the 3-d and all the pointless arrows you threw in to mask your overall lack of style/skill you can see that the bare-bone letters are crap.

 

 

 

 

 

ugh.

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along with every comment above u gota learn howto draw a staight line on comp. or just use pencil , or use the line tool :D

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Everyone does it when they start out, but trying to draw wilds out of nothing will get you nowhere.

 

practise some VERY simple letters, don't go for complexity. When you get some control and spacial knowledge, you can progress to working on your style, _then_ you can try some wilds. For now just KEEP IT SIMPLE.

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Guest PHYNE

well i dont dislike it but i dont love it......its actually better then ALOT of people that post in paper chase .......practice;)

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Guest ctrl+alt+del

nooo. shits so disproportionate.

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try to keep everything proportional, no thick lines next to hella skinny ones.....drop all those stupid arrows (especially the one on the M) , they serve no purpose....oh yeah, stay simple.

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how about you keep it simple, huh.

 

your M looks like this: ///

 

you have way too many unneeded things in the sketch.

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Originally posted by Mr. Peanut

the A and Z are pretty cool but the M and R are weak. simplify it and work on just the letters. do ad ons later. keep it simple homie.

my 2 cents.

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Originally posted by swif1

your M looks like this: ///

 

 

 

lol

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Guest willy.wonka

haha, there are about 5-6 marzes out there...

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