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DOODLE: the throwie just needs some practice, but whats up with the simples below? it looks like if you didn't really sketch out the bars to make them similar in width. besides, don't extend the V's bar to much because it can almost read YEDO.

ZID: not too bad man, it looks like you used bars in every single letters except the S. doing good so far, just keep doing simples, they're looking sharp.

aside all the drips and shit, use an image hosting site. like photobucket or flickr nowadays you can barely tell apart from a ghost attachment or a real attachment.

that's where you're entirely wrong. you can't run before you learn how to walk. simples are the basics of graffiti, or anything else really. you can actually tell, when looking at pieces or wildstyles, that the person who did that understands letter structure, cause what gives that shape of the style are usually extensions of the letter, but you learn later in time. BATES is probably one of the best examples: SIMPLE: PIECE: you can see he still keeps his letter structure, even in the piece. all the extensions and the tilt of the letters are what gives it its shape. hope it helped, and if anyone can back me up... please do.

RANT: you gotta go simpler, especially on that O, or A i really can't read it. don't try to change width in your letters yet, stay with simples or block letters for now.

nice man, this might be like a fancy art school suggestion but working on some anatomy on the legs would probably help a bunch. but whatever man, dope characters

BORIS: dope sketches man, but not really feeling those characters, plus the 3-d needs some serious work. but that's the strange part too, when you're working with letters your 3-d is on spot, but with that box there i cant see how it happens haha! nice work.

it's alright. just another ugly sister of failblog or that fucking cheezburger site. anyways there was some funny shit there.

interesting...

thank you man, that's probably one of the most complete crits i've ever seen, haha. i see what you mean. about the question, yeah it's a 2. my shit is still pretty fucked up. props.

Thanks for the crit redeye and deshi, yeah that R looks strange to me now. DECYFERON: thanks for the advice, i don't know why i rush things when i sketch. i'll just have to settle down and take it slower.

haven't posted here in a while but here's what i've been up to: Razón For the eraser battle: Reeson(reason)

^^^i disagree with you. BORIS THE BLADE: you still have some strange shit going on with your bars. im just not feeling them. but sure man color that sketch.

my vote goes to \>=+-] that piece is sick man, nice work. it was hard between Veritably Clean or him.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wwl8GsZKlfw&feature=related nah, kids in Colombia do this every day. anyways, sounds pretty cool, i'd do it!

i don't know, i think he did that on purpose

good sketches everyone, lets keep this going

erase

no prob, i'm just fooling around with the name. thanks for the crit, i appreciate it. thank you man

Razon2 sketch, experimenting with something new

damn, this shit's getting good. i've done already 2 sketches, but i think im gonna try for a third one

GRAFFLIFE25: you have potential with your backgrounds and stuff, but you need to learn letter structure. trash all the arrows or extensions and do plain simples

wow, you guys actually chose my word. i'm in on this.

Hey RECNEPS i got a question. are you left handed? you seem to have the same trouble that i have when i sketch with markers. always leaving those pinky marks, lol. Nice work anyways man

I would have voted for aristotle, his letters killed. but nice work pencil case. Who chooses the next word? if no one is going to choose i propose ERASE/R to be the new word