Crim, looking good nice to see you moving the style on, if I were you I would make the R a lil smaller it seems quite big compared to the other letters, the letter proportions of it are fine it just seems bigger, I don't mind the long middle drop on the M, you could develop that into a cool centre feature of a piece almost. I would definitely change the L though, the way it kicks back into itself. But I am being really picky withothose crits, because as a piece it looks good.