Crus - you need to lose the extensions, the arrows coming off the C and S look bad, they don't flow with the piece at all, also the jagged bit off the leg of the R just looks out of place, stay doing simples because your trying to advance too much and it isn't working, try getting your letters looking clean, the char is dope tho, I'm being harsh with the crit because it is obvious you wanna improve but your going about it the wrong way by forcing these extensions