no worries will try and draw on up for you.
Tork - I agree with everyone else, do simple straight letters to start, it is obviousl you like drawing what with all the background etc, just focus all that energy on your letters
all the colours and backgrounds aren't gonna make up for the letters, they are messy and the bars are all different and they will let down the finished background, keep trying to tighten them up and have some flow to them