really feeling the first one..esp the colors. oh yea like the ocean hand
.in the second..extensions like the small one coming of the E and n are wierd...i think if u ddint bend ur N in the right it wud look way better.
noy2 u shud really work on some simples..itll make ur letters look way better whne u have em down.
interesting touch to ur letters...i just wud never been able to guess ur letters if u hadnt written it..tahts something to think about...do u have other sketches?
i personally like it..esp the E , Y, S and t..i feel like the G and and Z are not on par with the rest of the other letters..i think theyre simpler but not sure...
alts sank vire and egzyst good shit.
shaken...name changE?
i havent been able to sketch much..
and im still stuck in a no color mode...i dont wanna fuck it up
dope post alts..feeling the new styles ur playing around with..esp feel teh alts with teh bboy char...
and thanks a ton for the sticks ..theyr came out real nice.
good stuff nuce..ur getting there...avoid..ur extensions kill ur peice..and maybe space out ur eltters.
hcokey ur lines look real shaky.. like ur m except that it doesnt have a top right bit like the top letf...the k looks wierd esp the right portion of it..and the E is funny.
ur 3d looks off..and larger in some ares.ur letters ar thcik in some areas and thin in others...ur generaly letter structure is lacking..work on simple consistent letters.
ur right ...12oz is the haters ball..
but ya..u have some interesting ideas stylistcially..but that doesnt matter if the letter structure is not there...working on simples will help u grasp letter structures and then u cna fux with extensions...both of these steps are equally annoying to get a good grasp of..but it pays off..when u add ur own funk to it.l..
look at a ton of fonts...i mean is the shit u see everywhere..simples i consder are wat other layman are used to and can read..its found in logos labels and other such advertising...so ur mind set is like ur a calligrapher...they do things formulaicly..ie watever u do to one letter u follow through with the others...things needa be consistent...ie letter thcikness..and 3ds going in the appropriate way
shine u need to work on ur letter strcuture cleanliness and extensions as well