feelin the throws polyp....esp teh first style...
um..mia....just do u have any papersketchs..its good that ur not going crazy with wildstyle and arrows and all..but like u need to tweak ur letters in terms of liek the letters being the same size...(ur i's teency compared to ur M and A...)..another thing to focus on is a consistent style...ur m is rather rigid..and ur A is wobbly...