i feel like the cracks arent that nice..thats just a matter of practice and looking at examples..nice progress tho..also its wierd that the r's the only lower case letter.
werd if its a full color peice...voting should theoretically be based on overall presentation...letters colors background etc...
if it were an outline battle it wud solely be letters.
but that being said ...straight letters from some ppl can burn fancy colored stuff.
noid like it..just feel like the o's extensions wierd..
shaken...dunno abt the A...looks like an 0 with a star in the mid..and the upper right bar of the k looks thin..
and stot..the extenison of the o looks outa place..feel like ur rs ur weakest eltter..just keep wat ur doing
u shud be able to do simples without the lines i drew in....sorry theyr shaky..used mspaint...
i feel like i cudve put more in tehre..but its self explanatory..hopefully..
think mathmatically...every peice has its own formula..
i agree with pimps up...maybe this thrad shud be called "post simples before we deem u ready to step away and progress"..crawl before u can walk.
root thats not bad but u got 2 carried away..takes away from teh A
lye maybe space out ur letters more...and elongate em..
im assuming that says syk...the s-y connections really wierd .lose it..the lower loop of the ys wierd aswell.lower it down so it doesnt touch the upper curve.and the right half of ur k is also wierd..to many bends.also wat he said^
i think gridpapers shud be used to a point..untill u can eyeball it...not that most ppl do use or need it...juts gotta remember consistently in term of levels like peanut showed and thickness of letters and styles