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critique my sketches

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by shor, Jun 8, 2003.

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  1. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    my first piece i did with this name.. i dunno just fuckin around someone else has my sharpies and prismas...so i used some cheesy crayola markers.. ew.. what do you guys think?!


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    ill have more on here, when i make some more.
     
  2. ASTISM

    ASTISM Guest

    1st things 1st, work on that tag
    thats the most important thing, worry about markers and what have you later...
    as for letters - go more simple - master the handstyle and you'll see how things get easier from there
     
  3. shor

    shor Member

    Joined: Jun 6, 2003 Messages: 385 Likes Received: 0
    yes, gotcha.. will work on that tag, im never saticfied with my tags..ever... but yeah i need to start out simpler

    ive changed what i wrote a few times now and im getting sick of it, and i know its not going to get any easier if i just keep changing.. so i might as well get goos with shor. but thanks a lot.
     
  4. NOUM

    NOUM Elite Member

    Joined: Mar 17, 2003 Messages: 3,966 Likes Received: 0
    everything astism said,it's nice,but just don't say crayola too loud your gonna get greensleeves all happy..
     
  5. mr.e

    mr.e Senior Member

    Joined: Apr 8, 2000 Messages: 2,343 Likes Received: 0
    definate potential. work on that hand alot. like, alot alot.

    other than that, happy writing.
     
  6. bob barker

    bob barker Member

    Joined: Apr 29, 2002 Messages: 431 Likes Received: 0
    told you to work on youre simples.:crazy:
     
  7. DopeConn

    DopeConn New Jack

    Joined: Feb 3, 2003 Messages: 62 Likes Received: 0
    word i like it, got alota potential
    i think it would look better if it were a little more simple and if the color scheme was simpler
     
  8. mr_president

    mr_president Banned

    Joined: Nov 19, 2002 Messages: 5,691 Likes Received: 0
    :eek: youre a fucking king!!!

    :king::king::king::king:
     
  9. bob barker

    bob barker Member

    Joined: Apr 29, 2002 Messages: 431 Likes Received: 0
    wow,CAN YOU EVER POST WITHOUT PUTTING UP AT LEAST 5 SMILEY FACES?
     
  10. DREDZ

    DREDZ Senior Member

    Joined: Dec 14, 2002 Messages: 1,934 Likes Received: 0
    you definitely have potential. keep at it.
     
  11. fame401

    fame401 New Jack

    Joined: Feb 19, 2003 Messages: 23 Likes Received: 0
    decent, needs to flow more... the s and the h dont flow but the o and the r are fine... work on ur flow and fuck the markers for now
     
  12. imported_splint2

    imported_splint2 Senior Member

    Joined: Jun 14, 2001 Messages: 1,571 Likes Received: 10
    agreed...that is just one less thing for you to think about, though i do like that purple in the r
     
  13. Mr.Clean

    Mr.Clean Member

    Joined: Apr 23, 2003 Messages: 462 Likes Received: 0
    word to whats been said

    lookin pretty good though, i like it better than the flix you showed me the other night. keep at it!
     
  14. --zeSto--

    --zeSto-- Veteran Member

    Joined: Jul 12, 2000 Messages: 6,979 Likes Received: 2
    just go black&white (and maybe a pencil to fill in) for the time being.
    Do waste time colouring in your pieces. Do waste time erasing mistakes.
    Just draw draw draw and you'll come along.
     
  15. nightagger

    nightagger Junior Member

    Joined: Jun 17, 2003 Messages: 130 Likes Received: 0
    nice...very nice...the only thing is dont go so crazy with the colors but keep postin:crazy:
     
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