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critique my sketches

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by shor, Jun 8, 2003.

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  1. shor

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    critique my sketches

    Discussion started by shor - Jun 8, 2003

    my first piece i did with this name.. i dunno just fuckin around someone else has my sharpies and prismas...so i used some cheesy crayola markers.. ew.. what do you guys think?!


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    ill have more on here, when i make some more.
     
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  2. ASTISM

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    ASTISM - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    1st things 1st, work on that tag
    thats the most important thing, worry about markers and what have you later...
    as for letters - go more simple - master the handstyle and you'll see how things get easier from there
     
  3. shor

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    shor - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    yes, gotcha.. will work on that tag, im never saticfied with my tags..ever... but yeah i need to start out simpler

    ive changed what i wrote a few times now and im getting sick of it, and i know its not going to get any easier if i just keep changing.. so i might as well get goos with shor. but thanks a lot.
     
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  4. NOUM

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    NOUM - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    everything astism said,it's nice,but just don't say crayola too loud your gonna get greensleeves all happy..
     
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  5. mr.e

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    mr.e - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    definate potential. work on that hand alot. like, alot alot.

    other than that, happy writing.
     
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  6. bob barker

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    bob barker - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    told you to work on youre simples.:crazy:
     
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  7. DopeConn

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    DopeConn - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    word i like it, got alota potential
    i think it would look better if it were a little more simple and if the color scheme was simpler
     
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    mr_president - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    :eek: youre a fucking king!!!

    :king::king::king::king:
     
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  9. bob barker

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    bob barker - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    wow,CAN YOU EVER POST WITHOUT PUTTING UP AT LEAST 5 SMILEY FACES?
     
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  10. DREDZ

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    DREDZ - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    you definitely have potential. keep at it.
     
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    fame401 - Replied Jun 8, 2003

    decent, needs to flow more... the s and the h dont flow but the o and the r are fine... work on ur flow and fuck the markers for now
     
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    imported_splint2 - Replied Jun 9, 2003

    agreed...that is just one less thing for you to think about, though i do like that purple in the r
     
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  13. Mr.Clean

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    Mr.Clean - Replied Jun 9, 2003

    word to whats been said

    lookin pretty good though, i like it better than the flix you showed me the other night. keep at it!
     
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  14. --zeSto--

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    --zeSto-- - Replied Jun 9, 2003

    just go black&white (and maybe a pencil to fill in) for the time being.
    Do waste time colouring in your pieces. Do waste time erasing mistakes.
    Just draw draw draw and you'll come along.
     
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  15. nightagger

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    nightagger - Replied Jul 6, 2003

    nice...very nice...the only thing is dont go so crazy with the colors but keep postin:crazy:
     
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