shor Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 my first piece i did with this name.. i dunno just fuckin around someone else has my sharpies and prismas...so i used some cheesy crayola markers.. ew.. what do you guys think?! http://www.angelfire.com/art2/shor/images/Shor.jpg'> ill have more on here, when i make some more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ASTISM Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 1st things 1st, work on that tag thats the most important thing, worry about markers and what have you later... as for letters - go more simple - master the handstyle and you'll see how things get easier from there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shor Posted June 8, 2003 Author Share Posted June 8, 2003 yes, gotcha.. will work on that tag, im never saticfied with my tags..ever... but yeah i need to start out simpler ive changed what i wrote a few times now and im getting sick of it, and i know its not going to get any easier if i just keep changing.. so i might as well get goos with shor. but thanks a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOUM Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 everything astism said,it's nice,but just don't say crayola too loud your gonna get greensleeves all happy.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.e Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 definate potential. work on that hand alot. like, alot alot. other than that, happy writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob barker Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 told you to work on youre simples.:crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DopeConn Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 word i like it, got alota potential i think it would look better if it were a little more simple and if the color scheme was simpler Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr_president Posted June 8, 2003 Share Posted June 8, 2003 :eek: youre a fucking king!!! :king::king::king::king: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bob barker Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 wow,CAN YOU EVER POST WITHOUT PUTTING UP AT LEAST 5 SMILEY FACES? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DREDZ Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 you definitely have potential. keep at it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fame401 Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 decent, needs to flow more... the s and the h dont flow but the o and the r are fine... work on ur flow and fuck the markers for now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_splint2 Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 Originally posted by fame401 fuck the markers for now agreed...that is just one less thing for you to think about, though i do like that purple in the r Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr.Clean Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 word to whats been said lookin pretty good though, i like it better than the flix you showed me the other night. keep at it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RumPuncher Posted June 9, 2003 Share Posted June 9, 2003 just go black&white (and maybe a pencil to fill in) for the time being. Do waste time colouring in your pieces. Do waste time erasing mistakes. Just draw draw draw and you'll come along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nightagger Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 nice...very nice...the only thing is dont go so crazy with the colors but keep postin:crazy: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrIot Posted July 6, 2003 Share Posted July 6, 2003 u got this but like my boy sed worry about color later .....when i started out i didnt colr 4 2 yrs. cuz i knew it woodve either cluttered the pic or mess it up i was even afraid 2 color bcuz uv that but get the letterfiures rite then move on it might help if u shade to substitute for the color but ......thats just my 2 cents....keep up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joker Posted July 7, 2003 Share Posted July 7, 2003 I'd say the critique you were looking for has been covered... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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