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Guest ASTISM

1st things 1st, work on that tag

thats the most important thing, worry about markers and what have you later...

as for letters - go more simple - master the handstyle and you'll see how things get easier from there

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yes, gotcha.. will work on that tag, im never saticfied with my tags..ever... but yeah i need to start out simpler

 

ive changed what i wrote a few times now and im getting sick of it, and i know its not going to get any easier if i just keep changing.. so i might as well get goos with shor. but thanks a lot.

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everything astism said,it's nice,but just don't say crayola too loud your gonna get greensleeves all happy..

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definate potential. work on that hand alot. like, alot alot.

 

other than that, happy writing.

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word i like it, got alota potential

i think it would look better if it were a little more simple and if the color scheme was simpler

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decent, needs to flow more... the s and the h dont flow but the o and the r are fine... work on ur flow and fuck the markers for now

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Originally posted by fame401

fuck the markers for now

 

agreed...that is just one less thing for you to think about, though i do like that purple in the r

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word to whats been said

 

lookin pretty good though, i like it better than the flix you showed me the other night. keep at it!

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just go black&white (and maybe a pencil to fill in) for the time being.

Do waste time colouring in your pieces. Do waste time erasing mistakes.

Just draw draw draw and you'll come along.

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u got this but like my boy sed worry about color later .....when i started out i didnt colr 4 2 yrs. cuz i knew it woodve either cluttered the pic or mess it up i was even afraid 2 color bcuz uv that but get the letterfiures rite then move on it might help if u shade to substitute for the color but ......thats just my 2 cents....keep up

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I'd say the critique you were looking for has been covered...

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