yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 ima take that into serious consideration....just old habits im tryin to break in the books before i start paintin again.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 your 3ds are off...an i would loose the bigX blings there a distraction on your piece Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
living proof Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 crits appreciatedddd Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 im not even gonna speak on the letters but..... when it comes to your color scheme you want your outline to stand out you should have used the blue 4 your outline and 3ds the yellow around the blue for the force-field and u need a neutral color like gray to block out the negative space in the background or at least thats how i would have did it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 an start wit rusto... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
queencityshit Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 best advise on 12 oz graffiti isnt suposed to be about what people on the internet think if you like what your doin then keep doin it. fuck what every one else thinks Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iTz PaYBacK Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 crits appreciatedddd dude just keep it simple with your letters. no need to work on connections just yet so start with straight letters. by straight letters i mean just simple basic font style letters that you might see every day. then from there you work on adding style and flow into your pieces. i agree with yellow force field rock with the issue of the color scheme. just keep at it, draw a piece a day this summer and stop wasting your money on ironlak, go get some rusto. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 11, 2010 Share Posted June 11, 2010 thanks, but cleanliness isn't the crits i'm lookin for. That's all a matter of patience, and having enough paint to recut shit 3 times. Maybe this isn't the best place to get advice anymore... Especially on letter structure. If you want to focus on working on your letter structure try painting a few pieces using only two colors instead of complex fades and fills. If you use one color for your fill, and one color for your outline/3d you have a lot more flexibility to go back after the fact and change and re-shape letters. I'm just a toy, but I'm pretty sure this cat knows what he's talking about. Rime MSK -> http://jerseyjoeart.wordpress.com/2010/06/06/sace-tribute-one-color-fill-ins/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
living proof Posted June 12, 2010 Share Posted June 12, 2010 yeah thanks guys, agree with everything you've said. i'll have a simple down in the next week to show Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted June 12, 2010 Share Posted June 12, 2010 other angle say somethin. Man i like where thi s outline is heading! I think the second e has a better look to it then the first one. I agree with what you said about the k, but I also think you could thicken up the right bar of the L 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mouhs621 Posted June 12, 2010 Share Posted June 12, 2010 i gotcha dude. yeah im not gonna stop painting. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 12, 2010 Share Posted June 12, 2010 ^^you should, especially illegal. a)you dont want to get caught up... for that. b)you dont want that out there... practice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 you're wasting a whole lot of expensive paint... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OhMyGosh! Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Hahaha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 stop using ironlak., dollar paint is fine and cheap Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
garw Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 you're hard working man vossy...I envy you on quantity of paint...have to take care of my son first, than wife...son have some cans but very well hidden, just leftovers available...wife would like me to have misstress instead of writing...but you're positive for me...keep on working...and say hello to Louise... 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Port-A-John Enthusiest Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 He paints cleaner, with nicer paint, all his letters are fitting and within the rule of the next one, his 3d/shadow is on point, and has better letter structure than 90% of you..yet you still talk shit? Yo, maybe its not that great..but for the toy thread? Shit, thats good stuff..keep at it Vossy. These kids are clowns and most of them dont know what the hell they're talking about. They're some of the shittiest writers on the face of the planet and they still find room to harshly crit. other people. Just work on some nice letters and you'll be set up, you paint great. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 bump those uptowns. keepin it solid on this thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 some older joints form 08,09 last flick i was piss drunk.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 He paints cleaner, with nicer paint, all his letters are fitting and within the rule of the next one, his 3d/shadow is on point, and has better letter structure than 90% of you..yet you still talk shit? Yo, maybe its not that great..but for the toy thread? Shit, thats good stuff..keep at it Vossy. These kids are clowns and most of them dont know what the hell they're talking about. They're some of the shittiest writers on the face of the planet and they still find room to harshly crit. other people. Just work on some nice letters and you'll be set up, you paint great. i disagree, about the letter structure part. i like vossy, and i think he's got some dope fills and stuff, but i think most of his LETTERS are pretty hurt, def not better than 90% of people on here... which if he keeps painting and sketching, will change. Anyway, my main point is, why dont you post some sketches in the toy post thread, vossy? maybe you could get a lil advice on some outlines and really start burnin shit... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 08,09,10 some progression in color schemes but to work on my letters for the rest of 2010 i aint doing anything but white fills..black 3ds an outlines...and yellow force-fields! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Uptown - Looks like you know what you are doing, but when you don't connect the bottom of your U to it's second vertical it kind of reads "lip" to me..... Like in the Upbot (lipbot) one... It works even if the connection is small, but sometimes that first part reads lip. Redeye- Haha, dude. What are you, managing my finances? You buying me paint or something? No. Then why the fuck do you care? You worry about your own shit, I'll worry about mine.... For a dude that wants crits on his own shitty graffiti, you have a fucking lame attitude. You talk like you are some sort of fucking legend, but you don't really need to go too far back in this thread to see that you are no better than the rest of us. Kick rocks shithead. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Vossy Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Ocean- The color scheme in the first one doesn't work... All the pastels and soft colors blend together, I can't really make out the letters. Also your pick background splat thing, is the same color as your fill... I think the red and yellow number is the best of the bunch, but the N needs to have its outline touched up.. It gets pretty thin near the left and middle bar. Nice work on that last one. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Looking back on this one I think I should have rounded the ends of the S's... It looks out of place. Does anyone else get the S's are angry with the arched 'eyebrow'? Or does that not really work? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 DEM ALIEN TITTIES haha yeh vossy, lose those insert things for sure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yellow force-field rock.. Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 vossy im already on the "but when you don't connect the bottom of your U to it's second vertical it kind of reads "lip"" thing been workin on some different U's.... an ocean i know that chick was mad when she tried to scrub them decos off her knockers...next time use acryllics...in less yer helpin with the clean up.... them str8s is nice really digging the LHS 1liner fire! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boom1969 Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 Not seein it bud but tight fill nonetheless. Only letter i dont actually like is the o But thats only personal opinion i think. Nice job Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted June 13, 2010 Share Posted June 13, 2010 thanks man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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