bitefight Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 i like that vade Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bitefight Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 what do you think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 The proportions are a little messed up on some of the letters. I think I messed the bevel up a bit too. I just decided to do it, once I was at the wall and I was't really sure how many shades of gray I needed to make it look convincing... I didn't have time to finishing the character, but I'll get it later. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EastHastings Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 i think you should stop putting the louise in so predominately. it takes away form the piece, and just looks bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Haha, yeah... But she likes seeing her name up, and she gets on my case when I don't give her a shout out... It's an easy way to keep the gf happy. I'll do a better job on it next time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shaken20 Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 yea, just practice her name in a notebook till it looks like the simples everyones about. haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliAlibi Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 tell her to put her own damn name up and quit piggy-backing on your work. :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vossy Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Haha, I'll let her know... She doesn't write... She just likes to give me a hard time when I show here what I've been doing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
C"mon Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Not my kind of letters but it look pretty clean,keep it up.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted May 26, 2010 Share Posted May 26, 2010 Vossy! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SKUMBUM Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 danm vossy you know how to rock a fucking simple props Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hungryest Hippo Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 not perfect but its cool. hoollllaaaa! lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 fairly new., crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 JEG, that shit is as whack as it gets. SCOE, you got no flow or consistency. never have. you boys need to learn the basics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 can you give critique that can help me improve please? im not trying to disprespect anybody., but how do i not have flow or consistency? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 I'm not saying this to be mean, but it's very obvious that you don't have simples down yet. I've seen you around the threads, just take the advice that has been given and use it. Do KEYBOARD simples to learn how to use and morph bars to make letters. ie, the spine of the E should be the same width the whole way down. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 ive done many simples., but im thinking about taking a break and doing more, i know its good to go back to the basics., and theres alot of mistakes on that piece but thats because what? ive only been painting for a month or so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 this is the best example i've seen of a raw peice using consistent bars for every letter. study this. this piece has serious style, but is very simple at the same time. I don't know this person, i just stole the flick. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SCOER Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 alright thank you., this is critisism that people should say 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 you want your widths on your letters to match up, that e looks out of place. I would def take everyon's advice and try to replicate fonts from a text editing program just type your name in and find a font you like then try an draw it, then paint it. after a while youll get a feel for how the letters are structured and it'll be easier to do pieces like the one you attempted without having it look like that. go back and look through the toy and toy paint threads. the advice thats already been given to others should help you out. ima stop here cause I wrote a fucking paragraph. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 :lol: @ rune... I'm gonna take the bus down there sometime this summer, even if it's just for pics. but i'd rather do something fun at a chill spot... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 i got lots of em man. jus let me know when. me an argus were bout to hit you up last week but we only had one breif chance to paint among the madness ... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 Srsly redeye come thru tha east coast kid i gitchooo over here Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 i'm on the eastern coast, just tucked in a little bit. let's get up man, for sure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted May 28, 2010 Share Posted May 28, 2010 clear some pm's mynd. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 One sec Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dr.nick Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 ^ gay ^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mind617 Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 /\ not everything has to concern you /\ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VADERnj Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 first actual pic post in here..think this came out good.. [/img] bumpin for crits.. vossy i think ur tryin to hard to get things right..instaed of planning out ur stuff u should just let loose on it and u might be surprised on what happens..maybe bring a simple sketch to go off of.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
umire Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 a little freestyle from today, one can and a bucket of paint :D 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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