Vivre Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 soooo...did sum hardcore sketching...made my connections fatter...and develpoed my karaks more and more..( they dont have a name anymore ! ) Crits..? Thanks !! :D hey mith, i like your letters, but your charachters are too cartooney like sike had said Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prime Chaos Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 too cartooney. i dont think that makes sense Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dusetwo Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 too cartoony..hmm.. thanks " atesk " your sig gave it away Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SupaCola Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Yo im new to this graff shit, any advice wud be chill. the first says hitek, the second says skitz and the last says blakie. name is supa but m jus usin different words to practice my letter styles. crits much appreciated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knim_One Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 if u cant rock straight letters how can u rock anything? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 if you was directing it at the supercola kid..then hes new...he probably wont know about straight letters yet...so instead of saying.." if you can do hm hm..you wont do hm hm " give him proper advice.. im gunna pull out that big simples thing i made.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Okay.. NO OFFENCE TO ANYBODY IN HERE...AT ALL...ALSO...NO BEEEF... Okay...i been here for a few weeks now...and from what i see in this thread...its all talk tbh...and hardly any flicks...and when there is flicks...they get overlooked by pointless chat...and i think that a minority of ppl here need to also go simple..exception of bounce..bonez..9 rides..mosoe..they are the only ones i can think off my head..but noone never really gives any one harsh consturctive crits neither...its just...do you cula better...or...you 3d is wrong...use a vanishing point.. which every one knows...you dont get better by pointing out the weak crits... and i know...cuz from BS ... i got pushed and pushed and pushed to do simples with no color..nothing..just letters...and once id got letters down...i startd using colour etc...and then i played with addons...and that the stage im at now..and thats what i think the majority of the ppl here should do ( with the exceptions off the ppl i named off my head ) ... becauase its the way too go...i never fort it was..but it seriously is.. this is my shit from when i wudnt listen to anybody about simples.. when i got told to do simpler stuff..i went to thisl..which isnt simpler i had karaks in the middle and everything.. i didnt know i was doing wrong..untill ppl drilled it into my head i needed simples..so i startd fresh with simples.. and came to doing this just take a look at how much better they look.. ^^ .. nice and crisp...with kinda funky leters...no karaks in the middle..no crazy addons..no crazy colorus...no nothing...just 2 culas..one karak...and letters.. SIMPLES AND HARD CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIZISM IS THE WAY FORWARD.. !!!!! I KNOW.. LISTEN TO ME OR DONT...I REALLY COUDLNT CARE LESS... But at the end of the day..from my experience...simples are the way to go..and you also get waaaaaaaaaaay more credit for them... dont get me wrong and dont think that im acting the BIG I AM...I KNOW EVERYTHING..WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE etc. but like i say..from my expericances .. i know what is true.. SIMPLES And in 20 years time...writer still do simples..all the time...you should be able to rock a good clean simple .. or you wont be able to rock anything bump for the new ones..SUPER COLA..I reccomend you read that my buddy ^^ :) :p ;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vivre Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 hey mith, im sorry to say it, but your a little bitch. not trying to start shit, just pointing out what no one is understanding here. ok, mith, you ask for crits, but when i gave one to you, you dont take it into consideration, you just blow it off like theres nothing wrong and go on thinking your big shit. get over yourself. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 what the hell.. your crit was this " i like your characters , but theyre to cartoony " what the fuck... what has that got to do with simples..?...erm..nothing ( taking into consideration that simples essay up there.. ) what has that got to do with characters...that a character is too cartooney..ugh.. how can i take a crit into consideration when it doesnt make any sense at all... so you get over yourself..before you go blowing off your mouth... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 for the battle, who do we pm our pics 2? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 some recent sketches. the third one i mite enter into the battle if i cant do any beter before wednesday. any critz?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PEYEEST Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Don't quit your day job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 cunt. constructive critz please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 ^ 2nd from top is best but skip the thingys on the sides the "i" is messin up ur flow maybe add another letter after? and your letters are still not proportionate that one and the 3rd one are ok but u still need work but doin better than most in here and dont enter that last one in a battle youll embarass yourself Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 nah. i was thinkin about ewntering the third one down, lol. just needs more work on it really. i really wanna develop that style. ne ideas on how? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 cheers for the critz btw Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 i really wanna develop that style. ne ideas on how? keep drawing it over and over and over, mess with the shape of the bars, etc basically just keep practicing, it will payoff eventually one day you will be like "I SEE THE LIGHT" lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 kk thx. like ur latest stuff btw. pretty decent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 thanks. i just keep sketchin a ton. i do like 3-5 every day lol. i have only been into it for around a year and my first stuff was soooo bad, so it shows what practice will get u even though i am still not that good but am a lot better than before so Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 lol. ur very good seein as you have only been doin it for a year. ive been graffin for about 10-11 months now but i started off painting alot more than i was sketchin so i didnt really get anywhee letter-wise. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MithOneLfc Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 here my prgression.. baha..the top one is " dope sick dude " Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 first peice (outlined for me) me doin own letters tryin a wild style. lol there is a breif, slow pogression of my work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 i dont have all my old REALLY shitty ones uploaded anymore but here goes a attempt at showing my progression i left out a few but i dont feel like separating this into two posts. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
E_B_A Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Here's my progression (I don't have any of my horrid, REALLY toy shit online, sorry...) http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/625_03.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/12-26-04-_01.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/12-26-04-_02.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/5195_05.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/625_02.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/102005_01.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/102005_13.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/postal_grey.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/postal_brown.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/torn_envelopes.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/four_page_trash.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/easter_egg_page.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/wild_yellow_wild_purple.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/crumbly_rocks.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/blue_green.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/vivid_yellow.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/freights_n_postal_sticker.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/orange_and_purple_burner.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/alien_ending.jpg http://www.shapelessmass.com/visuals/blackbook/02180703.jpg Looking at some of that, maybe I'm wrong and I have some really toy shit on line. Ha ha... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Q666 Posted February 26, 2007 Share Posted February 26, 2007 Here's my progression (I don't have any of my horrid, REALLY toy shit online, sorry...) Looking at some of that, maybe I'm wrong and I have some really toy shit on line. Ha ha... re-quoted it so u can see them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HEZERone Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 how's this crits plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugs Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 hezer, rad mith's post at the top of the page. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pseudo Posted February 27, 2007 Share Posted February 27, 2007 ahahaha katimari demacy kicks ace.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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