unreal1 Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 already a brave in the east bay, stop writing it... it's seriously common sense when a name is going to be taken, you make a gay name that has hella better possibilities, think about it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 About my throw- I wanted to get used to doing it fast because that's what gonna matter on the streets. And new sketch!! I like how this one turned out a lot... I'll clean it up and add 3d soon Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i wasn't exactly being a smart ass file. i am also another rise in the toy thread as you can see. new sketch yo. critz critz critz, i like this one a lot. gettin better. the S is good but the R is kinda wack. try an R without very left top part and just one whole piece, ya know what im sayin? E is kinda small so make that bigger with curvier sides. and I's are i think one of the hardest letters to make it look good but i can tell you that your I is kinda small too. dont make your letters fit into each other...like dont have the sides of the R and the sides of the I fit next to each other like its one line sorta...ahh shit i ono Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 nahh scartch what i said...about the whole R and I part..just make the I more noticable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 the first hand was better over all...this one is off balance...try wat you did with the white hand you did on the wall but just change the R. your R over here is gettin better but what i would do is make the part that sticks out and go down...(the right lower part of the of the R) more slanted towards downwords or in the middle...dont know if im really makin sense Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 About my throw- I wanted to get used to doing it fast because that's what gonna matter on the streets. And new sketch!! I like how this one turned out a lot... I'll clean it up and add 3d soon hexa make your letters more noticable..i mean i liked where you were goin with your style but your kinda going off track a lil to me. X is too big, H and A is small and not that noticable if it were only those letters. and the E is hiding too much behind the H... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 melbs, your from boston? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 Yeah, I think I just have to make my E a bit bigger and push it to the right a bit. The reason my X is so big is because that's the only way to make it flow well with the other letters Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i dont know...there are a few writers ive seen that has an X in the end but they have different styles from you so i cant really help you there. my bad Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
some_one Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 yeah, i know what you ment Young... i think... like this?... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 yeahh gettin better...S is kinda small tho. you need work on your E's too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 melbs, your from boston? Nah lad. Im from Australia :p Prob a stupid question but most of those word rules (other writers having your name etc) do apply overseas right? No one rights Rise in my city and im slowly falling in love with it.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 oh shit i can see why you think im from boston. one of my mates writes bosten, and thats him under me. ugly hand styles i know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 Switch around the letters a bit and you sould find something different... Like Sire or Resi or Seri... There. Three good names with the same letters. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melbs Scum Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 ive thought about sire before, dunno though. thnx for the critz btw youngone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thinksucks Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 ive thought about sire before, dunno though. thnx for the critz btw youngone theres a sire thats big in boston, and one big in philly, might be the same one i dunno Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hippy flip Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i'm new... here's the stlye i've been working on... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 That's really clean, but I'm not to keen on the letters... What does it say? Tok, Tek, took? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hippy flip Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 just to... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Z Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i would have guessed tek. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
llxseanxll Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 i'm new... here's the stlye i've been working on... It's lookin good, but go simpler. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnny Appleseed Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 k here's something a little more simple... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hippy flip Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 simpler... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
z0ne Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 but its not brave dumbass Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gonegonegone Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 does any one else remember that person who was in here with the name "caspa?" or maybe they are in here still. because i saw a caspa handstyle on a freight today and it looked like shit. and i thought it was really funny that i saw it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hippy flip Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 zone you're in no position to talk shit to anyone so shut the fuck up... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR.OK Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Trying a new style, not ready to add color yet. Any feedback on it would help alot, thanks! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Johnny Appleseed Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 if you outline it it will bring it out a lot more... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 theres a sire thats big in boston, and one big in philly, might be the same one i dunno yup they the same sire. SIRE GOA. he still reps that in philly even though that crew kinda died out back over here in boston. he moved back to philly like 1-2 years ago i think but honestly i liked his work over here than over in philly...he had a lot of ups tho. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoungonE Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 simpler... that looks like some straight west coast style type shit...pretty clean and fills and and all that...but lose all those lil parts and shit on the bottom...theres too much going on man. keep working on your letters and thats it then go up with cans and practice cuz it seems that your pretty much all set with how clean you are. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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