Smokey Chuck Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 dude this is a toy thred loven your shit man Thats not my shit, like I said thats ARK CMW from chicago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 some new stuff fro the exchange thread. and some quick sketchs and a throw....feedback wud be appreciated.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rend Posted July 3, 2006 Share Posted July 3, 2006 for a battle: was bored: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
doinitagain Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 rend clean up ur colorin man...i never really liked ur stuff though but hey keep at it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rend Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 i know. but like, wen coloring with prismas, if the object im coloring is small, the coloring is easy cuz i could make the ink all juicy and thick. but if wen im coloring something thats huge, like the arrow, the marker might get wasted fast. and like, it comes all un even wen i use the broad side. like how does newkon do it. like his coloring always look really solid looking, like no stroke ghost marks etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cretin Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 critz please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unreal1 Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 New throwie "ZE"... Kinda sketchy... And I finally found a name I can stick with... ZERM1. I didn't have enough space on the page so I put ER like an emergency room sign. I was gonna do a character related to that but I got too lazy and it was like 3am so I was sleepy... dont use any name with a erm... been done 2 many times. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
database Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 from an ozhiphop battle. [ignore the phrase on the side] feed back please!! yo feedback... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onewaykids Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 feed back pleez Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onewaykids Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 just sum stuff iv been working on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onewaykids Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onewaykids Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 crits for eny of my last 4 posts Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkYT Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 any critz? this kinda looked like the old first piece i did lols.. lols when u overlapp the sections of the letter.. looks okay to me..lols..uhmm..but when u do the letters i tink u should make the fatter part bigger..big to small.. u catch>?? lols imma toy too NEMP.. this skyt...the old skyyt.:huh: :p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 yo feedback... nice...The letters are nice and simple. I don't like the 3D that much though...instead I would maybe try a bubble background or so... You could try and improove the S and the U....they don't flow that well with the whole thing.... If the piece you posted isn't bitten you're getting somewhere...keep on practising and you'll get bettter... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWITCHAHOUSE Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 toys toys toys Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SWITCHAHOUSE Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 looks nice...wat do u write tho? i write switch... that was an old sketch from like a year ago.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bouncingsoul Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 Hmmm, new try at wildstyle... :edit: (To unreal1)-It's been done a lot before? I thought there would be some similar names but I didn't really see many people with "erm"... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 dude 2 many unnecessary extensions. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angermeans Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 fuck it. i dont want any critiques. ill do what i want Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tonysoprano Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 you know what i really love when people quote their own stuff because they didnt get feedback the first time, they are just asking for shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HostileGraffer Posted July 4, 2006 Share Posted July 4, 2006 fuck it. i dont want any critiques. ill do what i want That's the fucking atitude! Stop moaning and asking for feedback, this guy knows how its done... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swif1 Posted July 5, 2006 Author Share Posted July 5, 2006 I know its not paper, but whatever any comments welcome, I know the k is a bit off the main middle branch. You shouldn't do floaters like that on a freight. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 did these real quick... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 and i disagree abt the do watever comment made by some1 toys need advice it just doesnt work herre cuz here theres just toys giving other toys advice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blasto Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Blasto. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Say Werd! Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 advice...critiques? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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onewaykids Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 dude i like your stuff i thingk your on the wrong thred Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 Hmmm, new try at wildstyle... :edit: (To unreal1)-It's been done a lot before? I thought there would be some similar names but I didn't really see many people with "erm"... It looks as if you've added a new background. The extensions and so do not fit the style and don't fit the letters. Try to somehow maybe integate the extensions and stuff into the letters naturally and just hang them on the letters.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scribbler Posted July 5, 2006 Share Posted July 5, 2006 critz please This one is the best of the 3....Leave the 3D shit for later....Go simple and get some letter stucture down. Keep your letterbars the same width....you did that more or less in that piece^^^ Try and keep your letters on one level. NO arrows! Once you've got down some letter stucture you can SLOWLY start and tweek the letters a bit. If you've understood the letters enough you'll notice which teeks look wrong or unnatural or where extensions look wierd and unfitting..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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