stayposi831 Posted March 6, 2011 Share Posted March 6, 2011 just some new simple shit not feelin the top one so much crits and advice please?:D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 something i did in the garage today all free hand... ive never done a big piece so i know its not amazing. but there truly was NO planning... the more i look the more i need more paint :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune1 Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 yeahh...more work on ur letters....looks like your can control is aight tho, the mre you paint the less shaky your lines will get, an youll be able to tell when you might get drips an shit. this is a paper thread tho, your pic shoulkd be in the toy paint thread really. you should sketch/paint some simples like this an post em Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 all i saw was toys post here, my bad. and technically its paper ;P thanks for the input tho i really appreciate it 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 mr tv? did you just watch Exit Through The Gift Shop? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 Quick, scrappy stuff. Crits appreciated. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakro Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 feedback/advice please. second one is shaky because the sharpie and deco did not work together well. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 ^^^ separate your letters a bit more, space them out and let em breathe. Work on ure letter thicknesses too, keep all bars the same width. It probly wouldnt hurt to study some simple letter forms further back on this thread cos that K is pretty out there on the first ones. You wanna construct ure O like a donut, one solid curved block, u dont wanna be missing out the holes in letters right now. Hope that helps! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 7, 2011 Share Posted March 7, 2011 yokai - 2nd sketch first picture - your K isnt workin there, and im not feeling your I on that sketch as well as some others.. keep all your letters the same size maybe? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 Ye man that K is all over the fuckin place, more like an X lol. Im messing with sizing atm, got some things to get out of my system i think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snotballs Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 i would suggest not using marker and/or colouring anything in, use a pencil so you can fix things when you recognize a mistake, for example, you might realize that your A is hidden behind your J when your rocking a sketch, and that way you can erase it and play around with where you think it would sit best. have patience and really force yourself to buckle down and keep it simple, you're on the right track. most beginners, if not all, try to jump hurdles that they arent prepared for, and naturally, it sets them back. you'll look back and be thankful you learned the basics of strong letter structure, so you dont have to be one of those cats who hide behind those fancy extensions and know inside you cant rock a dope simple... hope this helps, lets see what ya got. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 must spread reps. well stated snotballs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 slowley getting my lettering together abit aiden request Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 mr tv? did you just watch Exit Through The Gift Shop? your funny. no i chose it because it the name of a character in a comic book i used to draw back in high school. im still working on a name. MR tv was a character always being negative and pissed off. so im using him now to say more positive messages. there's too much negativity in the US and especially in the streets of atlanta. id rather make people smile. im working on a name rite now that fits but for now ill be MR tv.. lol! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redeyedanimal Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 @ nvs - no. read the advice on this page. no hate, just tone it down a lot. and @ mr.tv - so you have seen exit through the gift shop? what you're doing now really seems like some hipster, movie inspired bs graffiti... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 @ nvs - no. read the advice on this page. no hate, just tone it down a lot. and @ mr.tv - so you have seen exit through the gift shop? what you're doing now really seems like some hipster, movie inspired bs graffiti... really? i appologize but iv been doing it since i was 17 if u had read my earlier post. i was shot for tagging a gang affiliated neighborhood @ 17 when i was homeless, and WAS inspired ta get back to it by some close friends now standing at 23 ive got A LOT of catching up to do. (and like i said before ive moved past that down spot in my life and dont want glory or street cred like 50cent im a suburban kid with heart hats been through A LOT from decisions made as a kid) i have income, thats why i can afford to use paint to practice... im not just some hipster thats a crazy accusation, passing judgment can only be true by meeting someone 101 IMO. some of my worst enemies are friends now due to miss judgment done on forums. im looking for critics, not just put downs if this doesn't clarify my statements then cool ill just take everything u have to say with a grain of salt. I have seen exit through the gift shop... good movie... truly crazy story.... and the message is good "DONT BE A SELL OUT" but would i go out and shit on other artists because now i think im a MASTER LIKE ALL THE PPL IN THE FILM?... NAH but i did learn more of the movement that has occurred while ive been couped up in my mind building cars and inventions rather than using paint to express things in color again. make ur judgments im not looking for friends just advice and tips... ive followed 12oz since 2006 and was spraying 2003-2005 when i was shot, a friend turned me back onto discussing online and now i see why i left it to the trolls. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 Lol, i kinda liked the mr TV's with some work they could be cool. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 slowley getting my lettering together abit aiden request ummm, go simpler just a tad.. whats it say, aioe? atop? oh aiden, well um. some extensions are kinda coming out of nowhere and weird. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 mr tv has potential, it just needs alot of work and practice..just redraw it over and over again Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 Thanks guys. ill keep practicing and one day ill get better, for now its just fun and stress relieving. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 pretty much the only way to get better is to draw and draw and draw. or you could buy those skill pills i saw people trying to sell a few years ago. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nvs Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 ummm, go simpler just a tad.. whats it say, aioe? atop? aiden...for a mates kid... just trying new things atm, so id rather ppl give me a honest opinion... here is a "hot" and a "nvs" looking forward to using some color and actually painting 1... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Teetas Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 to be honest, go back to STRAIGHT LETTER SIMPLES LIKE < SO Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 NVS isnt bad, but your other stuff needs alot of work. i agree with straights Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Annik5k Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 k.. more stuff in paint thread now. just finished. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 working on reprortioning my S and shit. ^^^^^^^^^^ and just fucing with coolors(: Thinking i overdid it? oh well, once again just fucking with some colors. crits and advice are greatly appreciated all(: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 If anyone needs advice then snotballs pretty much got it down. I have seen his shit in the new sketch thread and it is fucking insanely good. And SAON, im really feeling your stuff, keep it up! I like the way ure getting that slice of colour highlight in before u go for the black 3D, nice effect. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted March 8, 2011 Share Posted March 8, 2011 ehh..not much good shit has come out recently Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
artismyweapon Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 quick throwie, crits/advice appreciated Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sneekatoke Posted March 9, 2011 Share Posted March 9, 2011 ^go much simpler, both in your letters and handstyle... somethin i dont know if i like: quick steak: steakbattle: old throw: .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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