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cuda u should go simpler...work on simple block letters for now... u need to work on ur letter structure..as in the letters look wierd, ur extensions are awkward and and ur letter have inconsistent lengths at places...doing simples helps all these probs out.

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Ok, since I dont post much, i have to dump all my sketches in one post lol... so heres my bbook since my last post...

 

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The throwies coo....and the grey one wud look better without the doo dads...like the bottom .one does..u shud work on the black one ps..its dope..also for it..the lower leg of the L looks a lil big.

 

 

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this one looks weird.cuz the letters get bigger

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this is a good page..i like the top simple...and the zeal in the bottom is coo...its a nice simpler variation of ur complex style. the upper part of the E is kinda weak/weird.

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the bottome one is coo.

annnnnd there we go. crits plz!

my crits.

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cuda u should go simpler...work on simple block letters for now... u need to work on ur letter structure..as in the letters look wierd, ur extensions are awkward and and ur letter have inconsistent lengths at places...doing simples helps all these probs out.

 

yeah sounds good. I'll do more simples.

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