a mutant rancor Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 your letters are wicked spawn the third is the best imo not to top heavy and not to much overlap like the first and second between the n and t. the last one is dope but straighten out that T i would givemore advice if i knew more about letter structure and such lulz oh and yokai that is rad cept' the top bar on the k is a little thin and the I is bugging me i cant decide if it should be lower or upper case??? do you paint or just sketch?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Ye i do but not much, Im trying to get my skills a bit better on paper before i get too involved with cans. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 You fuckers are never any help lmao. But yeah I've done a few trains, if you saw one of mine id be geeked as fuck but I doubt it was mine. I found a tight train spot here under a bridge that has like 12 tracks side by side, I'm gonna go take hella graffiti pics so if I spot one of yours I'll definetly post it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 Hey guys I has a question. So since there's that negative space inbetween the n and t, should I juet let there be space or try to fill it? T is such a bad letter to end with lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakro Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 . . . . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Darkeist Posted September 7, 2011 Share Posted September 7, 2011 yokai i feel like you put too many motion lines around your letters. Your handstyle is getting better slowly. RANT - I htink the middle one is the best out of those except the letter A kind of goes against the flow. I think the handstyle on the last one is the best btw. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 gimme some feedback, trying to advance my style i know i shouldnt have done the connector thing on the S Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SiReZ_CUKkrew Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Hey guys I has a question. So since there's that negative space inbetween the n and t, should I juet let there be space or try to fill it? T is such a bad letter to end with lol Try to fill it with a little karacter or connect the n and t. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Yeah I see what you mean dark thanks. I really likw thww top of the a and the cross bar I'm flexible with I just need to figure out the legs. Work in progress, and sirez I would do a char but I'm trying to come up with an original bomb. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 U battle. Go vote Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Simple is the way to go! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spawn-Of-Sham Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Fuck yo simple haha Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 For the crits on ure U spawn i thought it was hella jumbled, felt like you lost the U flava if u know what i mean lol. Over complicated i guess but thats just me, i like simple swagger :D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Random shit for the homies Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Get some style toy! ^^^^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 that PUGOH was tight. Would be nice to see full colour on un lined paper from you dude. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerk666ems Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 that bottom SAON is is dope, i see that slip with the red in the bottom of the 3d on the S.but i ain't hatin i dig the the hell out of that piece though tight work homie Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 JNeon thanks, I just rolled a blunt, sat down, and sketched haha. And yee I know my shits just black and white on binder paper usually, Its just more convenient, I hate spending money on markers and I haven't gone racking for a coo minute. But I'm looking to get some markers soon, hopefully. And jerk, litle slips here and there go impatient haha, just some random style i think I'm going to start working with. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stayposi831 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Anyone and everyone starting out, sketch the fuck outta your notebooks binders computer paper reams, everythin of the sort. Start off simple, work with your bars, proportionizing everything you can. Learn how to structure your letters the simple way, over time, you'll get better. I'm not implying that I am a great writer, bbut I don understand the concept of structured letters and proportions. Bump yokai and mosk, shit just keeps getting better(: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 WORD! Did this, lookin at connections and such. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerk666ems Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 yokai every flick you post looks better than the last, keep that shit up homie stayposi i think binder paper actually works good for sketches cause the lines help keep the letters the same height and width when starting out. but dude i dig that that style, start using it more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 Simple is the way to go! Awesome simples, I'm diggin' em. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
515ZomB Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 WORD! Did this, lookin at connections and such. BAD ASS color combo! The letters are awesome. You're like simples god in this thread man lol, shit looks clean. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
n30n b0n35 Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 haha! thx man but im nothing special, still got a long way to go before i get where i wanna be. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 i like the red saon simple. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tha whut Posted September 8, 2011 Share Posted September 8, 2011 anyone wanna do an exchange kinda bored Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jerk666ems Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 what do you write homie? and mutant don't think i forgot about you yo shit's just been hectic lately, but i got that ORSE coming up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sewek Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 hey people, just started writing and after some crits, trying to keep it simple and absorb everything i can. so any tips :) // secr't s'rvice p.s- anyone with a keen eye will spot the 2010 but i wrote it by accident ^^ too high.:lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkeist Posted September 9, 2011 Share Posted September 9, 2011 the first one is the best. also. fuck this thread Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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