hypergraphia Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 decy, I like the doz part, but I dont feel the e, maybe change it up a bit? cosign Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZiD Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 so can anyone give me any advice on how i should make the K better? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasty Nost Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 make it shorter. make it like a regular k. drop the little curve at the top. and make it join together, instead of like bars overlapping each other, get what im saying? and make it smaller, saves space, so you wont have to be buyin BB's all the time. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 its not that bad though. i've got better shit. that was just a fuck up because i was watching america's best dance crew. hahahahah. anyway, if i take time, it's not that bad.you shouldve seen my old shit. hahahaha. well, take your time den.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dendicott Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 key board simples... do a stech and try to get every letter to look like you ripped it off a keyboard... so KUBE ---- then start bending shit... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
life WDS Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 I know you're proud of it and all and feel the need to whore this piece of shit around paper chase but please stop already, this is like the 3rd thread I've seen you post this sketch in. At least you posted this in the right thread this time. :lol: umm y r u still talkin shit? i thought i said i was done arguing and fighting with u, but yet ur still goin around like some lil 4th grader opening his mouth:confused: i dont get it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasty Nost Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 well, take your time den.. yeah. its better than posting shit bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 sleepy haha time to stop drawing :lol: fuckewd it up not flowing... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 yeah. its better than posting shit bro. did you just say i post shit? hahahaa Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OLSE Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 your c looks like a lower case a put your extension elsewhere or find another why to connect it good experimenting though. keep doing it Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristophanes Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 just messing around with blends as my fills... doing that, i sacrificed perfect structure for my letters. V is too thin, E is messed up, X is ehhhh, and the T got messed up and need to lose the two circles. see anything i missed? feedback? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 cardboard, comments please. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristophanes Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 ohhh sale i feel that... instead of a dot you could try a star or something, that'd look pretty good. oh and the L on LMC isn't the same height, may want to tweak that. but yeah dude, hot shit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bifkanater Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 freshhhh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rabeler Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 more later...:) :) :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BIG_BAG_CREW Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 cardboard, comments please. wow, best thing I have seen in a couple of pages. very nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 cardboard, comments please. yeah dude im feeling that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RELAPSER Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 dooooodles Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 I need to start working on my S's... crits? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 rabel get back to work on your letters... and your l looks like a backwards j on some of them Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 naw i dont like it, and your o could be mistaken for an 'e' on thew last one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DonaldFour Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 Anyone else got crits for me beside ruck? and yeah i see the e thing now.. I need more than just 'i dont like it' :( i personally thought they looked alright.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 30, 2008 Share Posted March 30, 2008 haha my bad, i mean i like your m but your n looks odd and the s looked odd aswell on a few looked squished n shit Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerosol Ruckus Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 i like that green forcefield, it makes yellow, black n pink pop Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristophanes Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 donaldfour i bet if you cleaned up your letters a bit, you know, made them less sketchy, it'd look better. i like the N on the last one, the second U, the second/third M, the first O, and you just need to keep working with your S's, not bad though. work on your shading a little, too. and don't get discouraged from criticism that sounds harsh... i doubt ruck was trying to be an ass. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BIG_BAG_CREW Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 Donald I know you are going for the "disorganized and disheveled look" in your sketches, but Im just not feeling it. Your letter sturcture is alright, although the S's are hurting. Try making your fills, outlines, and 3d cleaner. Also, not loving the color schemes. I think it could be really nice if it was cleaner with better colors. If you don't want to do that its fine just a suggestion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
APE_MOB Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 ill eat your shit u uzbekastainians cuz its good for me Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasty Nost Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 cardboard, comments please. a little bit to sexy bro. just a little bit to sexy. hahahaha, sick shit forreal. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 yea thats def dope. for vice Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scope06 Posted March 31, 2008 Share Posted March 31, 2008 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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