Someone Special Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 sketched the CRA but freestyled the E, i wish i hadnt... crits? kinda weird, dont like the swir;ls or at least the size of em, make em bigger, thats a weird style though but if you work with the details and extensions, you may be onto something that i may like a lot Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 just a lil summat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 and summat i just finished Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cre8tiv Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 I like the direction the second VARE is going in better than the first. something about the first one just doesn't look right. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 and summat i just finished straight but some of your 3d is off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 the lenth and the letters are quite squinty was a simple rush job on the first one tbh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 straight but some of your 3d is off. thats cool ill agree with u there Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
freakeenyc Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 the 3d ones sick bro. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 thats cool ill agree with u there Some other places, but the main place I noticed is the lower leg on the "R" for reference. Nice though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cre8tiv Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 Some other places, but the main place I noticed is the lower leg on the "R" for reference. Nice though. the R in general has 3d on the left, while the rest of the letters has it on the right. looks out of place. I love the letter structure though. working on the 3rd would make a piece like that a LOT better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 the R in general has 3d on the left, while the rest of the letters has it on the right. looks out of place. I love the letter structure though. working on the 3rd would make a piece like that a LOT better. the R has some 3d going to the upper left and some just going to the left.;) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 shitty pics, i was high and i aint write in like a month. crits crits Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cola0793 Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 pace, i like the simple yet effective handy u got. try a mop to it? coke, its all in how u use your markers man. u cant stop, look at your pencil line, go, stop, go over it again, stop, look at the pencil line ect ect. u gotta just do it, and all of your letters need to be uniform in some way. i can tell u tried with your little points on the bottom. keep developing. my entry for the same shit coke is doing. crits would help, had a hard time fitting it on the gd paper. yea i hate coloring and i was using a dried out highlighter but w/e i suck no excuses but yours is real nice except on the last a you should put a bar thru the middle and the t sorta sticks out to me a lil too much...idk nice hand tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vare_one Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 pace, i like the simple yet effective handy u got. try a mop to it? coke, its all in how u use your markers man. u cant stop, look at your pencil line, go, stop, go over it again, stop, look at the pencil line ect ect. u gotta just do it, and all of your letters need to be uniform in some way. i can tell u tried with your little points on the bottom. keep developing. my entry for the same shit coke is doing. crits would help, had a hard time fitting it on the gd paper. im really feeling this dope work yo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 crits crits crits please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dryst Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 and summat i just finished i dont think the 3ds off just the r would be positioned from front to back the rest are back to front...which would mean either make the E overlap the r or make it smaller so it looks like its back farther than the v and a and matches up with the rihgt side of the r....if that made any sense :) that and the bottom right side of the R needs to be lifted diagonally Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 long story short vare try using a ruler to match up the 3d. not to offend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 took a better photo of previous. idk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amsone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 crits CAN I GET SOME CRITS. IT WOULD BE APPRICIATED. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 yes, go simpler Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fube Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 yea i hate coloring and i was using a dried out highlighter but w/e i suck no excuses but yours is real nice except on the last a you should put a bar thru the middle and the t sorta sticks out to me a lil too much...idk nice hand tho well, im haveing 2nd thoughts about the random bars anyway, also, i wanted the t to stand out because its just about the middle letter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 been bored cuase of shitty snow ( its the kinda that dont stick and you cant make snow people or anything.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 made this at sschool, critz please, its the int thingy, i know I is small compared with t, but i like that :D critz and tips please :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
=SALE= Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 woops, wrong tag :p here it is, critz please critz and tips please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ubertoy Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 What should I work on from where I am (pics are a few pages back) I'm at like a writers block (heh) I have the simples, but I don't know how to add style to my stuff, any suggestions? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eny Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 What should I work on from where I am (pics are a few pages back) I'm at like a writers block (heh) I have the simples, but I don't know how to add style to my stuff, any suggestions? write simple, maybe even boxed. practise practise practise. work your way out of the box. don't rush progression. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tutleone Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 I'll color see if makes any better super shitty 3-D Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
krazzie_ammo Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 yeah, the 3-d is reall off. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dryst Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 long story short vare try using a ruler to match up the 3d. not to offend. how u figure?....he just doesnt have a vanishing point...all u gotta do is make the lines look at least somewhat parrelle and itll be fine Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
b0nez Posted February 1, 2007 Share Posted February 1, 2007 crits and suggestions ( its still in pencil so i can change it :D ) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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