What the fuck? theres a reason we're posting in the toy thread, no one here is the "graffiti master" so chill out with your fucking e-beef. You wanted crits, I gave you crits. Go back to simples. I don't have a personal vendetta against you here, believe or not, I'm trying to help. When I started doing simples, I improved immensely.
If you're doing simples, keep doing them, hell, post em up. But don't post shit and expect people to baby you.