Seek One Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 heres my two toy sketches i did in class last week if you want to help me it would be much appreciated and if you wantto bash me what the fuck go ahead...they are both simialar new style i tryed th second one sucks more though and i know the Q is fuct...they say seque http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque.gif'> http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque2.gif'> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seek One Posted May 16, 2001 Author Share Posted May 16, 2001 eh try the link forthe second one if it doesnt work for you http://www.graffheadz.8k.com/seque2.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid furie Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 *start simple* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fr@se Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 does that say seque? ------------------ -604- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seek One Posted May 16, 2001 Author Share Posted May 16, 2001 yes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RIM THE JOB Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 its not that bad.. but just start simple... how long have you been writing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AeRoS0ul Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 it dosnt look balanced to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazy Gringo Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 The first one looks decent excepct for you s, fix that shit and you got my vote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest worthlessoner Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 damn you suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dumpybottom Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 i like the first one except for the top part of the s..... not that my opinion really means shit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest platapie Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 top ones pretty cool. run with it then paint it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iamsowack Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 I think it needs to be more balanced its alright I SUCK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blunted Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 the static lines makes the arrow look like a penis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destruction by Definition Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 just work at it...at least you have original style, which is lacking today with most writers... ------------------ <<BOMB HARD, DIE YOUNG>> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uselessuse Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 JUST MAKE YER LETTER STRUCUTE BETTER.PAINT THAT SHIT.WERK HARD AT IT.WITHIN ANOTHER YEAR U SHOULD BE ABLE TO ROCK NICE PIECES IF U PAINT ALOT ANDWERK YER STYLE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest SymonSays25 Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 Damn! How did you think of the name Seek!?!? I wish I would have thought of that! ------------------ http://members.fortunecity.com/purefunk1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoSeR Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 just draw that same sketch like 20 times everytime notice small details you dont like and change them soon you will have a nice piece but dont try it with all your pieces you will die... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrannyRevel Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 Seque: First, i don't like the arrow (or the top of the 's.' whichever) in both pieces. i don't like the fact that it is thicker and longer than your letters and that it sticks out, covering some of your letters. it might be okay to stick a bigger, longer piece on the bottom, the top, or running away from it on the end, but don't put it running into the middle of your piece from the outside. the fact that it covers up your letters and nothing else seems to overlap as much kind of bothers me, too: i think if you're going to overlap the arrow so much, overlap some other stuff,too. Second, do more with your letters. i think they are slightly abstracted, but to roll with the style you're leaning towards, you need to push them farther. i'd suggest doing two things. one, abstract single letters and put them together. for example, make the craziest 'e' you can, 's' you can, and so forth. it might help creatively to do this as just written letters rather than blocked/outlined letters. the second technique is to sketch out the form your piece might take. right now, it's not very striking as an entire composition. so draw some kind of geometry and fit the letters into it. Finally, make all your lines count. As an example, the bottom of the 'u' in the second sketch is kind of bumpy, and the lines that define the bump or elbow that you've put into it aren't working together. by that i mean, they aren't drawn in relation to lines in other letters around them, and the top of the elbow follows (at times) a much different curve than the lines at the bottom of the elbow. this makes it look toyish. and with that, i've confused the whole fukkin board. goodnight gentlemen. granny oner Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeckFiftyOne Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 What Revel Said. Sketch it over and over. See what dosen't look right and fix it. sometimes I use pencil, Just In Case Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeBddub Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 i like it... but check your 3d... and take revel's advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seek One Posted May 16, 2001 Author Share Posted May 16, 2001 Symon i dont write seek anymore i write it seque as in sequence because i found out alot of people write seek Revel thanx for the advice i will try to fix the top of that S and thanks to everyone else who gave me advice....this sketch is from last week and since then i been doing it over and over and tweaking it here and there so i will try to improve this style. -Seque Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest imported_SecretAgentX9 Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 not feeling the "s". other than that, not too bad. have any more simple stuff? post that, i would like to see that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JedaOne Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 keep trying it i liek the style [This message has been edited by JedaOne (edited 05-17-2001).] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SleepOnIt Posted May 16, 2001 Share Posted May 16, 2001 uhhh the sneaky trik for eh kinda sketches...put some 3d on it ...but that is only if you want to disguise it. ahhh forget it...i cant offer constructive advice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2pac Posted May 17, 2001 Share Posted May 17, 2001 SEEK You are the biggest sucker. You have shitty ass style, and you eat testicles like meatballs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest worthlessoner Posted May 17, 2001 Share Posted May 17, 2001 I think red devil is a big ass toy, and so is seek.. you both should be hit by a car.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Ouija Posted May 17, 2001 Share Posted May 17, 2001 I like them both. The S on the first one is cool. ------------------ ouija13transcend3a Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sirca Posted May 17, 2001 Share Posted May 17, 2001 seque, nice shit dood keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JedaOne Posted May 22, 2001 Share Posted May 22, 2001 post some more shit seque Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
i sketch sace Posted May 23, 2001 Share Posted May 23, 2001 2 pac i think its time you shut the hell up man...i have seen other work from him and he is mad good keep up the good work man- nick,...im joshes cousin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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