n30n b0n35
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Simplify and lose the extensions/connections for a while. Also space it out a bit more, let the letters breathe.
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Rework but now the I feels a little big lol
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maybe if i make the connection to the first leg of the A it will balance a little better. I guess the shortest part of the A shouldnt be shorter than the O to be consistent.
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Stuff i been messing with. All crits welcome.
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This is what im workin on atm. Shitty pic and no thrills.
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Perts, that effect in the ufo beam is killer. I would peep a whole piece like that.
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decided to do a quick Junior simple as he was last person who posted in here
Double bump for bottom of page.
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decided to do a quick Junior simple as he was last person who posted in here
BUMP for doing it right, simple style. Alot to be learned from this, study it.
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Thx doodle, much 'preciated!
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Anyone wanna help me out and do a YOKAI throw?? Im struggling and could use an example :(
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JR, I would say ure R and N are a little on the chunky side but lookin good otherwise.
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Huge thx for the crits and opinions guys, agree with all of it. Back to the grind!
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All crits and opinions appreciated, seriously, be as harsh as you like. (and constructive)
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Thats an eye opener redeye, massive props to alts.
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Jitsu one looks a little bunched up to me.
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Thx for the advice JR. I totally get you on the A. It was a case of finishing the piece and instantly not being happy with it. I spray painted the page first and for some reason its impossible to rub out pencil lines if you fuck up so i kinda had to roll with something i wasnt 100% with.
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Did this for a buddy over on Devart
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My entry for the toy battle.
Your hiding too much of your letters by not making them stand up straight. Go simpler and more consistent, thats the key to making an impact with simples. Also, practice practice practice, the more simples you do the sooner you can move on.
Construct your letters with bars and it all starts to fall into place. When i say bars i mean straight, un-wobbly, consistent bars.
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Things i like, things i dont like. Wanted to go big on the first page of my new book. All opinions/crits welcome.
Also, i did a progress picture on my devart page if anyone wants to see my process and crit that lol
http://n30n-b0n35.deviantart.com/#/d3i9vx5
hit that link ^^^
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Working with the shapes
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All depends on preference really. Acrylic paint pens are opaque but dont blend where as alchohol based pens blend but bleed through paper so u need thick paper or to put something behind. I think some sort of paint marker is best for outlines as it gives u a solid line. Personally i like molotow paint markers but they can be a little tricky to use. If all else fails, use coloured pencils :P
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^^^ You need to make your letters more consistent. E.g. The vertical bar of ure Y is way thinner than anything in the rest of the sketch. Work with making all ure bars of equal thickness and length.
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Ty rakse. Heres another to finish my blackbook. Outline is a little messed because of the copic i used but meh. Gonna go a bit simpler in my new book, think i went a little over the top with the arrows lol.
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Feelin that SAON, love the A.
Something i been working on. The Y needs some tweeking and resizing.
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Toys post here...
in Paper Chase
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also ty eli, preciate it!