n30n b0n35
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That last one looks a little on the RAVE side. I cant really say much more than that dude lol.
Crits appreciated.
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Some nice U's in here. My effort:
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no ure right lol, tuesday is the sixth. Lets just go with wednesday, i will give it one more crack before i throw in the towel on this one.
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Thats pretty nice MOSK, old skool flava.
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its the toy battle... Constructive criticism is best.
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Havent started yet. Fucking V in here and a U in the alphabattle :(
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kinda old
Whack compared to the other stuff i seen from u dude.
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^^^ ure effects are on point dude but when hittin a simple like this you want everything as consistent as u can possibly get it. EG. ure Z is massive compared to the rest of ure letters and ure B dips too low. 3D is clean and im feelin the colour. The crux of progression is being able to see ure own mistakes and thus improve from there. That aside bro, ure movin forward.
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ye the top of the C is a little on the thin side.
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Nice to see some dope Y's. Good shit!
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the I is a little big :/ shall i keep workin these shapes? or try something else?
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With you on all that bro. ty.
Work on ure letter thicknesses, they arent very consistent. Like the top of ure E and the legs of ure R. In fact the R in general needs some TLC. keep at it.
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I cant seem to get a nice style in my lowercase Y... fuckin annoying.
Think its all a bit squashed on the left side too compared to the A and I.
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SAON coming back with some heat, nice work.
Crits plz:
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Spawn
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nice fire effect spawn
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Holy hell dude... u got a higher rez pic?? that size is not doing it justice.
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Stuff
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ZOMB, that JERK would have been a killer simple if you had kept the J down.
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ure lines are lookin alot cleaner but the 3D needs alot of work.
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When doing simples like this, proper straight, u want everything as consistent as possible for maximum impact. Look at how low the legs on ure K join compared to the R. K and R are very similar in structure.
Also, very much enjoying that BANKS piece.
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Thx dude. Fucked the F up a bit but im pretty happy with the rest!
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Toys post here...
in Paper Chase
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Ye i do but not much, Im trying to get my skills a bit better on paper before i get too involved with cans.