Jump to content

Sevage

Member
  • Posts

    260
  • Joined

  • Last visited

Everything posted by Sevage

  1. That last red one satire, fucking love what that style has evolved into
  2. That Mosk sketch. Very nice
  3. Always good to see a Shin sketch.
  4. Yeah I can't read it either...what does it say?
  5. Nice, I'll do one tomorrow
  6. exchange anyone? no colour i write sev
  7. You have a good wavy type flow going from the bottom bars on the M, then it gets passed onto the bottom of the A and looks like it should continue onto the K but you made it skinny there. Sometimes I will draw a bar like that throughout the whole piece connected and then erase it after. (if that even makes sense...) I would also recommend losing the skinny extensions for a few sketches, also when sketching the letter structure use bars. ie:
  8. I'm not sure why but I love fills like that last one....
  9. @thebosdj It looks good, I feel like the best part of the piece is the really good symmetry of the extensions, it makes them have somewhat of a purpose. The worst part is probably the lack of flow the letters have with each other. Going to have to disagree with this... I feel like the bars on the bottom are proportionate to the bars on the top and the letters.
×
×
  • Create New...