Flixxx your stuff is good but.... On that vares out line theres alot of unnecesary little... umm.. i dont know what to call them but little bars that just rest on your letters that dont even connect to the letters or contribute to the letters. I would take those out and make your letters no so stretched out looking and compact everything just a little bit and i think it will look better.
Yea and take out those bits on each side of the peice they dont even come off of anything... No what you should do is keep the bits but try to figure out a way for them to come off a peice or bar of the letter.