yo Weev
I don't know if your serious or not, but if you are:
1. Take your time. I know you have some time after school or in study hall to at least spend forty five minutes on your shit.
2. Get rid of that "L" underline thing. I use to do those waaaay back in the day. I don't know why.
3 Ditch the nibs on the "Your". It's a good thing to experiment and be creative. Thats the whole point of sketching. I'm just tellin you that it aint working in your favor
4. Structure! The top of the "U" is raggedy. Take your time and work on the proportions. The "N" makes no sense. Try doing a light pencil sketch first, then use some markers for the outline and 3D.
5. Practice. All the time, everyday