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new sketches and old sketches. criticism needed.

Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by aerosoled, Jun 17, 2002.

  1. aerosoled

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    new sketches and old sketches. criticism needed.

    Discussion started by aerosoled - Jun 17, 2002

    from newest to oldest.
    http://www.cartogra.com/rs/392F9FD0-8244-11D6-B42B-0090277A760E/screen'>
    the z is weak on this one^^^

    [img]http://www.cartogra.com/rs/392FA0FC-8244-11D6-B42B-0090277A760E/screen'>
     
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  2. TresOne

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    TresOne - Replied Jun 17, 2002

    The 'z' is kinda weak on the top one, and the 'e' is kinda weak on the bottom one - but not bad..keep it up.:)
     
  3. unseen

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    unseen - Replied Jun 17, 2002

    My onley advice to you is dont be afraid to go nuts. Put uxtensiond on your letters color it funny just do what you do and try things out because everyone knows what a letter looks like its how u make it urs.:D
     
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  4. ~DeNtOnE~

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    ~DeNtOnE~ - Replied Jun 18, 2002

    npretty dope

    just keep working it you color skills are hot! i like the old school you will grow out of it but its still hot~ peace~
     
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  5. MrMajicMarkker

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    MrMajicMarkker - Replied Jun 18, 2002

    these guys are going easy on you. you have a LOOONG ways to go. but potential is there
     
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    misery#3 - Replied Jun 18, 2002

    Get a little inventive with the letters, create some kind of style that is your own, the colors are cool but dont be so bold be creative, you got lots of potential. Can you paint that the way it is? Or would it come out a lot more differnet? And also how long you been writing?
     
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    big PERM - Replied Jun 18, 2002

    "just keep working it you color skills are hot! i like the old school you will grow out of it but its still hot~ peace~"

    are you on crack? his color skills are far from "hot" in fact i think it makes the overall sketch worse than it actuall is, my advice is to start with one color and make that look dope then get fancy. keep working, dont paint that.
     
  8. DETO

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    DETO - Replied Jun 18, 2002

    NO. stay simple till you know what you are doing. after you are good with simple letters, then try something a little more origional and difficult. stay basic. peace.
     
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  9. Destruction by Definition

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    Destruction by Definition - Replied Jun 19, 2002

    i like the black and white better, its more simple...plus the letters are much better
     
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  10. Arson.85.ATG

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    Arson.85.ATG - Replied Jun 19, 2002

    i'd say toy but truth is we were all toys...keep up the good werk...negativeity is never good for building positivity......
     
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  11. blink_ATX

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    blink_ATX - Replied Jun 19, 2002

    keep trying kid
     
  12. MiceHoe

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    MiceHoe - Replied Jun 20, 2002

    the K, S, and E are all better in the older one. Just keep fucking around with the letters, alone, not in the whole word. Just develop each letter on its own.
     
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  13. cdz

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    cdz - Replied Jun 20, 2002

    not good.
     
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    NOLA-WRITER - Replied Jun 20, 2002

    its all good.... you got potential...

    TASK GA NEW ORLEANS
    FUCK WILT FUCK WILT FUCK WILT
     
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  15. SayOne

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    SayOne - Replied Jun 20, 2002

    just an insight from my enormous head

    why do some people immediantly (sp?) start out by trying to do wildstyle shit keep it simple, you do have potential just practice thats it :)