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Discussion in 'Paper Chase' started by MestOne, Jun 23, 2002.

  1. MestOne

    MestOne Member

    Joined: Jul 17, 2001 Messages: 382 Likes Received: 0







    what can i do to improve?
  2. RickJameski

    RickJameski Junior Member

    Joined: Apr 11, 2002 Messages: 235 Likes Received: 0
    try to up the shape of your letters and pieces a bit... other than that you seem like you are doing all right, draw alot.
  3. ~DeNtOnE~

    ~DeNtOnE~ Senior Member

    Joined: May 6, 2002 Messages: 1,072 Likes Received: 0

    well your better then me!
  4. whydontyudie

    whydontyudie Guest

  5. JUWSE

    JUWSE Junior Member

    Joined: May 10, 2002 Messages: 159 Likes Received: 0
    yeah, keep sketching. i like a lot of it.
  6. another loser

    another loser Elite Member

    Joined: Jul 16, 2001 Messages: 3,011 Likes Received: 9
    your all missing this, he said what to improve.
    "keep sketching" is something he'll do anyway, but he needs stuff he can incorporate into those sketches.<HR>

    the only person that posted something to help improve
  7. misery#3

    misery#3 New Jack

    Joined: Feb 24, 2002 Messages: 0 Likes Received: 0
    Upon seeing your works one thing came to mind that would make your stuff so much phater. take a can of white right, anc use it to make a line on the inside of your letters called and inline, this is like just out lining the letter but reverse inside that would look hot on the last painting.
  8. another loser

    another loser Elite Member

    Joined: Jul 16, 2001 Messages: 3,011 Likes Received: 9
    he did inlines on the last 2 paint flix.
    the very last one was with harbor blue rusto.

    he wants help in letter structure.
    hes actually been listening on paint technique.
  9. rainydays

    rainydays Guest

    your stuff is very clean...you have a good hand just work on letter structure because a lot of the pieces all look almost the same...but other than that its a ll very nice...keep at it;) ;)
  10. evilistic

    evilistic Elite Member

    Joined: Jul 22, 2001 Messages: 3,554 Likes Received: 0
    simple mate simple...
    looks like youve got too technical to soon.try and step back a bit and focus on the letters not how wildstyle itll look.
  11. cheps

    cheps Member

    Joined: Jun 23, 2002 Messages: 289 Likes Received: 0
    They are looking good man. The only thing I could pick out is to try new things. Try to add maybe a few extensions on some letters to make it look alot more full, other than that, they look well done, keep at it.

  12. krie

    krie Guest

    arr i like em man, keep it up
  13. tears*uno

    tears*uno Guest

    they all look the same.... mix it up a bit, add some variety
  14. chizm

    chizm Senior Member

    Joined: May 29, 2001 Messages: 1,165 Likes Received: 0
    das good, dunnnie.
  15. DETO

    DETO Dirty Dozen Crew

    Joined: Apr 25, 2002 Messages: 11,348 Likes Received: 155
    fix the "s" but its pretty good.